1. SOURCE-BASED QUESTIONS
1.1 The following cognitive levels were used to develop source-based questions:
COGNITIVE LEVELS | HISTORICAL SKILLS | WEIGHTING OF QUESTIONS |
LEVEL 1 |
| 30% (15) |
LEVEL 2 |
| 40% (20) |
LEVEL 3 |
| 30% (15) |
1.2 The information below indicates how source-based questions are assessed:
1.3 Assessment procedures for source-based questions
Paragraph question
Paragraphs are to be assessed globally (holistically). Both the content and structure of the paragraph must be taken into account when awarding a mark. The following steps must be used when assessing a response to a paragraph question:
2. ESSAY QUESTIONS
2.1 The essay questions require candidates to:
2.2 Marking of essay questions
2.3 Global assessment of the essay
The essay will be assessed holistically (globally). This approach requires the teacher to score the overall product as a whole, without scoring the component parts separately. This approach encourages the learner to offer an individual opinion by using selected factual evidence to support an argument. The learner will not be required to simply regurgitate 'facts' in order to achieve a high mark. This approach discourages learners from preparing ‘model’ answers and reproducing them without taking into account the specific requirements of the question. Holistic marking of the essay credits learners’ opinions supported by evidence. Holistic assessment, unlike content-based marking, does not penalise language inadequacies as the emphasis is on the following:
2.4 Assessment procedures of the essay
2.4.1 Keep the synopsis in mind when assessing the essay.
2.4.2 During the reading of the essay ticks need to be awarded for a relevant introduction (indicated by a bullet in the marking guideline/memorandum), each of the main points/aspects that is properly contextualised (also indicated by bullets in the marking guideline/memorandum) and a relevant conclusion (indicated by a bullet in the marking guideline/memorandum) e.g. in an answer where there are 5 main points there will be 7 ticks.
2.4.3 Keep the PEEL structure in mind when assessing an essay.
P | Point: The candidate introduces the essay by taking a line of argument/making a major point. |
E | Explanation: The candidate should explain in more detail what the main point is all about and how it relates to the question posed (line of argument). |
E | Example: The candidates should answer the question by selecting content that is relevant to the line of argument. Relevant examples should be given to sustain the line of argument. |
L | Link: Candidates should ensure that the line of argument is sustained throughout the essay and is written coherently. |
2.4.4 The following symbols MUST be used when assessing an essay:
2.5 The matrix
2.5.1 Use of the matrix in the marking of essays.
In the marking of essays, the criteria as provided in the matrix should be used. When assessing the essay note both the content and presentation. At the point of intersection of the content and presentation based on the seven competency levels, a mark should be awarded.
C | LEVEL 4 | |
C | LEVEL 4 | |
P | LEVEL 3 |
C | LEVEL 4 | }26–27 |
P | LEVEL 3 |
MARKING MATRIX FOR ESSAY: TOTAL: 50
PRESENTATION
CONTENT | LEVEL 7
| LEVEL 6
| LEVEL 5
| LEVEL 4
| LEVEL 3
| LEVEL 2
| LEVEL 1*
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LEVEL 7
| 47–50 | 43–46 | |||||
LEVEL 6
| 43–46 | 40–42 | 38–39 | ||||
LEVEL 5
| 38–39 | 36–37 | 34–35 | 30–33 | 28–29 | ||
LEVEL 4
| 30–33 | 28–29 | 26–27 | ||||
LEVEL 3
| 26–27 | 24–25 | 20–23 | ||||
LEVEL 2
| 20–23 | 18–19 | 14–17 | ||||
LEVEL 1*
| 14–17 | 0–13 |
*Guidelines for allocating a mark for Level 1:
SECTION A: SOURCE-BASED QUESTIONS
QUESTION 1: HOW DID THE DEPLOYMENT OF MISSILES TO CUBA CONTRIBUTE TO COLD WAR TENSIONS BETWEEN THE SOVIET
UNION AND THE UNITED STATES IN THE 1960s?
1.1.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 1A – L1]
1.1.2 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1A – L2]
1.1.3 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1A – L2]
1.2 1.2.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 1B – L1]
1.2.2 [Definition of historical concept from Source 1B – L1]
1.2.3 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1B – L2]
1.2.4 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1B – L2]
1.3 1.3.1 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1C – L2]
1.3.2 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1C – L2]
1.3.3 [Evaluate the usefulness of Source 1C – L3]
Useful to a great extent:
Useful to a lesser extent
1.4 [Comparison of evidence of from Source 1B and Source 1C – L3]
1.5. 1.5.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 1D – L1]
1.5.2 [Extraction of evidence from Source 1D – L1]
1.5.3 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 1D – L2]
1.5.4 [Extraction of evidence from Source 1D – L1]
1.6 [Interpretation, analysis and synthesis of evidence from relevant sources – L3] Candidates may use the following as points to answer the question:
Use the following rubric to allocate a mark:
LEVEL | CRITERIA | MARKS |
LEVEL 1 |
| 0–2 |
LEVEL 2 |
| 3–5 |
LEVEL 3 |
| 6–8 |
(8) [50]
QUESTION 2: WHY DID SOUTH AFRICA BECOME INVOLVED IN THE ANGOLAN WAR OF INDEPENDENCE?
2.1 2.1.1 [Definition of historical concept from Source 2A – L1]
2.1.2 [Extraction of evidence from Source 2A – L1]
2.1.3 [Extraction of evidence from Source 2A-L1]
2.1.4 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 2A – L2]
2.2 2.2.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 2B – L1]
2.2.2 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 2B – L2]
2.2.3 [Extraction of evidence from Source 2B – L1]
2.2.4 [Evaluate the reliability of Source 2B – L3]
Reliable to a great extent
2.3 2.3.1 [Analysis of evidence from Source 2C – L2]
2.3.2 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 2C – L2]
2.4. [Comparison of evidence in Sources 2B and 2C – L3]
2.5 2.5.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 2D – L1]
2.5.2 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 2D – L2]
2.5.3 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 2D – L2]
2.5.4 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 2D – L2]
2.6 [Interpretation, analysis and synthesis from relevant sources – L3] Candidates may include the following aspects in their responses:
Use the following rubric to allocate a mark:
LEVEL | CRITERIA | MARKS |
LEVEL 1 |
| 0–2 |
LEVEL 2 |
| 3–5 |
LEVEL 3 |
| 6–8 |
(8) [50]
QUESTION 3: WHAT WAS THE IMPACT OF THE BLACK POWER MOVEMENT ON AFRICAN AMERICANS LIVING IN THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA DURING THE 1960s?
3.1 3.1.1 [Extraction of information from Source 3A – L1]
3.1.2 [Extraction of evidence from Source 3A-L1]
3.1.3. [Explanation of historical concept from Source 3A – L1]
3.1.4 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 3A – L2]
3.1.5 [Determining the usefulness of Source 3A – L3]
Useful
3.2 3.2.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 3B – L1]
3.2.2 [Extraction of evidence from Source 3B – L1]
3.2.3 [Interpretation of evidence in Source 3B – L2]
3.3 3.3.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 3C – L1]
3.3.2 [Interpretation of evidence in Source 3C – L2]
3.3.3 [Extraction of information from Source 3C – L1]
3.3.4 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 3C – L2]
3.4 3.4.1 [Extraction of evidence from Source 3D – L1]
3.4.2 [Interpretation of evidence from Source 3D – L2]
3.5 [Comparison of evidence in sources to determine similarities – L3]
3.6 [Interpretation, analysis and synthesis from relevant sources – L3] Candidates may include the following aspects in their responses:
Use the rubric below to assess this question.
LEVEL | CRITERIA | MARKS |
LEVEL 1 |
| 0–2 |
LEVEL 2 |
| 3–5 |
LEVEL 3 |
| 6–8 |
(8) [50]
SECTION B: ESSAY QUESTIONS
QUESTION 4: CASE STUDY – CHINA
[Plan and construct an original argument based on relevant evidence using analytical and interpretative skills.]
SYNOPSIS
Candidates need to indicate whether they agree or disagree with the statement. If they agree with the statement they should briefly explain why and support their stance with historical evidence.
MAIN ASPECTS
Candidates should include the following aspects in their responses:
Introduction: Candidates should take a stance by agreeing or disagreeing with the statement.
ELABORATION
Conclusion: Candidates should tie up their arguments with relevant conclusions. [50]
QUESTION 5: INDEPENDENT AFRICA: COMPARATIVE CASE STUDY – THE CONGO AND TANZANIA
[Plan and construct an original argument based on evidence, using analytical and interpretative skills]
SYNOPSIS
Candidates need to critically discuss the successes and challenges faced by both Tanzania and Congo with specific reference to economic, social and cultural development after they gained independence from colonial rule.
MAIN ASPECTS
Candidates should include the following aspects in their responses
Introduction: Candidates should critically discuss the successes and challenges faced by Tanzania and the Congo with specific reference to their economic, social and political development after they gained independence from colonial rule.
ELABORATION
Political transformation of Congo and Tanzania
Similarities:
Differences:
ECONOMIC TRANSFORMATION OF CONGO AND TANZANIA
Similarities:
Differences:
SOCIAL AND CULTURAL
Education and language
Education in Tanzania
Education in the Congo
DRESS
ART
Conclusion: Candidates should tie up their argument with a relevant conclusion. [50]
QUESTION 6: CIVIL SOCIETY PROTESTS FROM THE 1950s TO THE 1970s CIVIL RIGHTS MOVEMENT
[Plan and construct an original argument based or relevant evidence using analytical and interpretative skills.]
SYNOPSIS
Candidates should indicate to what extent the various forms of protest actions were successful in ending racial discrimination and segregation.
MAIN ASPECTS
Candidates should include the following aspects in their response:
Introduction: Candidates should indicate to what extent they agree with the statement.
ELABORATION
Reasons for the emergence of the Civil Rights Movement:
Conclusion: candidates should tie up their arguments with a relevant conclusion. [50]
TOTAL: 150
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
1.1 You know my name! [50]
1.2
‘Feeling my way through the darkness
Guided by a beating heart,
I can’t tell where the journey will end
But I know where to start.’ [Avicii] [50]
1.3 ‘We should invest in books not bullets.’ [Malala Yousafzai] [50]
1.4 ‘Snowflake’ is an appropriate name for Generation Z – also known as the Post Millennials. [50]
1.5 Leave no man behind. [US Army Soldier’s Creed] [50]
1.6 The pictures reproduced below may evoke some reaction or feeling in you, or stir your imagination.
NOTE: There must be a clear link between your essay and the picture you have chosen.
1.6.1
[Source: Getty Images] [50]
1.6.2
[Source: www.masscommunicationtalk] [50]
1.6.3
[Source: www.pinterest.com] [50]
TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: TRANSACTIONAL TEXTS
QUESTION 2
2.1 LETTER TO THE EDITOR
[Source: www.pinterest.com]
You have noticed an increase in the number of homeless people who own pets.
Write to your local newspaper to air your views on this matter. [25]
2.2 INFORMAL SPEECH
[Source: www.pinterest.com]
The increasing pressure on teenagers has led to many of them falling into a rut as a means to cope. This has given rise to an escalation in mental health issues such as depression.
Write an informal speech that you will present to your grade in which you address the issues that surround teenage depression, giving cautionary advice on how best to avoid this issue. [25]
2.3 INFORMAL LETTER
A friend and his/her family emigrated at the end of your Grade 11 year.
Write a letter to your friend informing him/her them of a distressing experience you endured this year that you wished you could have shared with him/her. [25]
2.4 OBITUARY
An award winning and celebrated actor/actress has been fatally injured while performing his/her own stunts for a new movie due for release early next year. The incident occurred while being filmed on location in Toronto, Canada.
Write his/her obituary for publication in the Hollywood Reporter. [25]
2.5 INTERVIEW
Humble, local Port Elizabeth man and Survivor winner, Tom Swartz, has gained fame for “Outwitting, outplaying and outlasting” his competitors on the reality show. Write the interview that takes place between you and Tom in which you find out about his experience as a survivalist and his objectives for the future. [25]
2.6 MAGAZINE ARTICLE
Over 21 million people volunteer in the UK at least once a year and this contributes an estimated £23,9 bn to the UK economy. Behind these big numbers is a big contribution. These 21 million people are a shining example of how we can all make a big difference to individuals and communities every day from improving the environment we live in, spending time with those who may otherwise be lonely and contributing to a range of other essential services and support. We believe such a big contribution is worth a big celebration! [Edited from https://www.awarenessdays.com/awareness-days-calendar/volunteers-week-2018/. Accessed on 23 November 2018] |
The UK ‘celebrates’ its annual national Volunteer Week this year from 18–24 February, Australia, 20–26 May and Canada, 7–13 April.
Why does South Africa not have such a campaign?
Write a magazine article in which you express your views on the idea of a Volunteer Week, how it can be beneficial to all parties concerned and how such an initiative could be realised.
Give your article a suitable title. [25]
TOTAL SECTION B: 50
GRAND TOTAL: 100
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
TABLE OF CONTENTS
SECTION A: POETRY
PRESCRIBED POETRY | ||||
QUESTION 1 | Essay question | 10 marks | Page 5 | |
QUESTION 2 | Contextual question | 10 marks | Page 6 | |
QUESTION 3 | Contextual question | 10 marks | Page 7 | |
QUESTION 4 | Contextual question | 10 marks | Page 8 | |
AND | ||||
UNSEEN POETRY | ||||
QUESTION 5 | Contextual question | 10 marks | Page 9 |
NOTE: SECTION B: NOVEL | |||
ANSWER ANY ONE OF THE FOLLOWING FOUR QUESTIONS. | |||
QUESTION 6 | Essay question | 25 marks | Page 10 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 7 | Contextual question | 25 marks | Page 10 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 8 | Essay question | 25 marks | Page 12 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 9 | Contextual question | 25 marks | Page 12 |
SECTION C: DRAMA
ANSWER ONLY ON THE DRAMA YOU HAVE STUDIED.
ANSWER ANY ONE OF THE FOLLOWING SIX QUESTIONS. | |||
QUESTION 10 | Essay question | 25 marks | Page 15 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 11 | Contextual question | 25 marks | Page 15 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 12 | Essay question | 25 marks | Page 17 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 13 | Contextual question | 25 marks | Page 18 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 14 | Essay question | 25 marks | Page 20 |
OR | |||
QUESTION 15 | Contextual question | 25 marks | Page 20 |
CHECKLIST
Use this checklist to ensure that you have answered the correct number of questions.
SECTION | QUESTION | NO. OF QUESTIONS TO ANSWER | TICK |
A: POETRY | 1–4 | 2 | |
A: POETRY | 5 | 1 | |
B: NOVEL | 6–9 | 1 | |
C: DRAMA | 10–15 | 1 | |
NOTE: In SECTIONS B and C, answer ONE ESSAY and ONE CONTEXTUAL question. |
SECTION A: POETRY
PRESCRIBED POETRY
Answer any TWO of the following questions.
QUESTION 1: POETRY – ESSAY QUESTION
Read the poem below and then answer the question that follows.
FUNERAL BLUES – W.H. Auden
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The poem, ‘Funeral Blues’, focuses on how the depth of love increases the sense of loss and despair.
Critically discuss how the use of DICTION and IMAGERY establishes the TONE in the poem.
Your response should take the form of a well-constructed essay of 250–300 words (about ONE page). [10]
OR
QUESTION 2: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the poem below and then answer the questions that follow.
MOTHO KE MOTHO KA BATHO BABANG – Jeremy Cronin
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2.1 Account for the mirror used by the man in the poem. (2)
2.2 Explain the warning implied in line 15 (‘He’s being watched’). (2)
2.3 Explain how being imprisoned changes a ‘person’ (line 3) into a ‘prisoner’ (line 4). (3)
2.4 Critically comment on how the concept of Ubuntu is demonstrated in the poem. Refer to the tone in support of your answer. (3) [10]
OR
QUESTION 3: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the poem below and then answer the questions that follow.
FELIX RANDAL – Gerard Manley Hopkins
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3.1 How does the description of Felix Randal as a ‘mould of man’ in line 2 suit his occupation? (2)
3.2 Felix Randal’s illness affected him in two ways. Explain. (2)
3.3 Discuss the speaker’s observation in line 9 with reference to the sonnet structure of the poem. (3)
3.4 How does the speaker’s memory of Felix Randal in lines 12–14 create the final tone in the poem? (3) [10]
OR
QUESTION 4: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the poem below and then answer the questions that follow.
AN AFRICAN ELEGY – Ben Okri
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4.1 Traditionally an elegy is a mournful poem written in response to death. How is this contradicted in the poem? (2)
4.2 Refer to line 3: ‘We are precious’. Consider the connotation of the word ‘precious’ and show how this statement is true of the African people in the context of the poem. (2)
4.3 In line 20, the speaker refers to the dead in a joyful rather than a sad way. How does this contribute to your understanding of African people? (3)
4.4 Refer to the last stanza. How do the images of nature create the final tone? (3) [10]
AND
UNSEEN POEM (COMPULSORY)
QUESTION 5: CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the poem below and then answer the questions that follow.
SOME LIKE POETRY – Wislawa Szymborska
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5.1 Refer to line 4. In your own words explain what the attitude of learners is to poetry. (2)
5.2 What is the speaker implying by listing some of the things one likes in stanza 2? (2)
5.3 Comment on the effectiveness of the image in lines 17–18. (3)
5.4 How does the structure of the poem reinforce the central idea? (3) [10]
TOTAL SECTION A: 30
SECTION B: NOVEL
Answer ONLY on the novel you have studied.
THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – Oscar Wilde
Answer EITHER QUESTION 6 (essay question) OR QUESTION 7 (contextual question).
QUESTION 6: THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – ESSAY QUESTION
Dorian Gray shook his head and struck some soft chords on the piano, ‘Like the painting of a sorrow,’ he repeated, ‘a face without a heart.’ [Ch. 19]
Critically discuss to what extent Dorian’s reflection of himself is an accurate assessment of how his character develops.
Your response should take the form of a well-constructed essay of 400–450 words (2–2½ pages). [25]
OR
QUESTION 7: THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the extracts below and then answer the questions that follow.
EXTRACT A
For every sin that he committed a stain would fleck and wreck its fairness. But he would not sin. The picture, changed or unchanged, would be to him the visible emblem of conscience. He would resist temptation. He would not see Lord Henry any more – would not, at any rate, listen to those subtly poisonous theories that in Basil Hallward’s garden had first stirred within him the passion for impossible things. 5 He would go back to Sibyl Vane, make her amends, marry her, try to love her again. Yes, it was his duty to do so. She must have suffered more than he had. Poor child! He had been selfish and cruel to her. The fascination that she had exercised over him would return. They would be happy together. His life with her would be beautiful and pure. 10 He got up from his chair, and drew a large screen right in front of the portrait, shuddering as he glanced at it. ‘How horrible!’ he murmured to himself, and he walked across to the window and opened it. When he stepped out on to the grass, he drew a deep breath. The fresh morning air seemed to drive away all his sombre passions. He thought only of Sibyl. A faint echo of his love came back to him. He 15repeated her name over and over again. The birds that were singing in the dew drenched garden seemed to be telling the flowers about her. [Chapter 7] |
7.1 Refer to lines 1–2: ‘But he would not sin’. Account for the decision Dorian makes at this point in the novel. (3)
7.2 Refer to lines 3–4: ‘He would not see Lord Henry any more’. In your view, is Dorian’s decision not to see Lord Henry realistic? Motivate your response. (3)
7.3 Refer to line 7: ‘She must have suffered more than he had.’ Critically comment on how Dorian’s ability to show concern here is contradicted later in the novel. (3)
7.4 Refer to line 7: ‘Poor child!’ Explain what Dorian’s expression indicates about his attitude towards Sibyl. (3)
AND
EXTRACT B
When they reached the top landing, Dorian took out the key and turned it in the lock. Then he stopped, and a troubled look came into his eyes. He shuddered. ‘I don’t think I can go in, Alan,’ he murmured. [Chapter 14] |
7.5 Place this extract in context. (3)
7.6 Account for Campbell’s ‘cold’ attitude towards Dorian. (3)
7.7 Comment on Dorian’s reference to the dead body as ‘the silent thing’ in line 11. (3)
7.8 ‘Even though Dorian is able to avoid justice, there is no escape from his conscience.’ Critically comment on this statement by referring to the mood created in both extracts. (4) [25]
LIFE OF PI – Yann Martel
Answer EITHER QUESTION 8 (essay question) OR QUESTION 9 (contextual question).
QUESTION 8: LIFE OF PI – ESSAY QUESTION
‘I felt even my soul had been corroded by salt.’ (Ch. 92)
Critically discuss to what extent this statement is an accurate assessment of the way the character of Piscine Molitor develops.
Your response should take the form of a well-constructed essay of 400–450 words (2–2½ pages). [25]
OR
QUESTION 9: LIFE OF PI – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the extracts below and then answer the questions that follow.
EXTRACT C
I love Canada. I miss the heat of India, the food, the house lizards on the walls, the musicals on the silver screen, the cows wandering the streets, the crows cawing, even the talk of cricket matches, but I love Canada. It is a great country much too cold for good sense, inhabited by compassionate, intelligent people with bad hairdos. Anyway, I have nothing to go home to in Pondicherry. 5 [Chapter 1] |
9.1 Why is Pondicherry no longer Pi’s home? (3)
9.2 Refer to line 7. Provide a possible explanation for Pi’s observation that he still sees Richard Parker in his dreams. (3)
9.3 Despite their serious conditions (such as cancer) many patients seek to visit Pi in order to comfort him. What is it about Pi’s story that they find so compelling? (3)
9.4 To what extent is Pi able to recover adequately after his rescue? Explain your answer. (3)
AND
EXTRACT D
‘I told you two stories that account for the 227 days in between.’ [Chapter 99] |
9.5 Place this extract in context. (3)
9.6 Refer to line 18: ‘And so it goes with God.’ Comment on what Pi’s tone reveals about his relationship with God. (3)
9.7 What does the ‘[long silence]’ in line 24 indicate about the investigators’ understanding of Pi’s version of events? (3)
9.8 Critically comment on the mood in both extracts and show how this is essential to understanding Pi’s survival. (4) [25]
TOTAL SECTION B: 25
SECTION C: DRAMA
Answer ONLY on the play you have studied.
HAMLET – William Shakespeare
Answer EITHER QUESTION 10 (essay question) OR QUESTION 11 (contextual question).
QUESTION 10: HAMLET – ESSAY QUESTION
Critically discuss to what extent Hamlet is both a victim and a villain.
Your response should take the form of a well-constructed essay of 400–450 words (2–2½ pages). [25]
OR
QUESTION 11: HAMLET – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the extracts below and then answer the questions that follow.
EXTRACT E
Flourish of trumpets. Enter CLAUDIUS, King of Denmark, GERTRUDE the queen, POLONIUS, his son LAERTES CLAUDIUS [Act 1, Scene 2] |
11.1 This spectacular scene opens showing Prince Hamlet dressed in black. Explain the dramatic effect that is created by presenting Hamlet in this way. (3)
11.2 Refer to line 1: ‘our dear brother’s death’. Account for the irony in this line. (3)
11.3 Refer to line 9: ‘this warlike state’. Discuss how this line may have both a literal and figurative interpretation. (3)
11.4 ‘Now follows that you know young Fortinbras, Holding a weak supposal of our worth,’ (lines 17–18)
In these lines Claudius indicates that Fortinbras is not a threat to Denmark nor to Claudius. How is this assumption proven to be incorrect at the end of the play? (3)
AND
EXTRACT F
LAERTES I will do’t, CLAUDIUS Let’s further think of this; Enter GERTRUDE How now, sweet Queen? 25 [Act 4, Scene 7] |
11.5 Why does Claudius align himself with Laertes at this point in the play? (3)
11.6 Comment on the significance of Gertrude’s appearance at this stage. (3)
11.7 Refer to Laertes’ response to his sister’s death in line 28: ‘Drowned? O, where?’
If you were the director of a production of Hamlet, how would you instruct the actor to deliver these lines? Pay specific attention to body language and tone. Motivate your instructions. (3)
11.8 Show how deception ultimately leads to tragedy by referring to both extracts in your response. (4) [25]
OTHELLO – William Shakespeare
Answer EITHER QUESTION 12 (essay question) OR QUESTION 13 (contextual question).
QUESTION 12: OTHELLO – ESSAY QUESTION
Critically discuss to what extent Othello is both a victim and a villain.
Your response should take the form of a well-constructed essay of 400–450 words (2–2½ pages). [25]
OR
QUESTION 13: OTHELLO – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
EXTRACT G
OTHELLO Why, why is this? [Act 3, Scene 3] |
13.1 The word ‘jealousy’ is repeated in this extract. To what extent does Iago’s own jealousy lead to this encounter with Othello? (3)
13.2 Explain how Iago will provide the proof that Othello demands in line 16. (3)
13.3 Refer to line 19: ‘To show the love and duty that I bear you.’ How is Iago’s character revealed in this line? (3)
13.4 Refer to lines 24–25: ‘I would not have your free and noble nature/Out of self-bounty be abused.’ Comment on the irony in this line. (3)
AND
EXTRACT H
DESDEMONA: (offers a handkerchief) Here, my lord. [Act 3, Scene 4] |
13.5 Account for the significance of Desdemona offering a handkerchief to Othello at this point in the drama. (3)
13.6 Othello’s reference to the magical properties of the handkerchief in line 17 is a reminder of earlier references made to magic when he eloped with Desdemona. Discuss. (3)
13.7 Refer to line 25: ‘Then would to God that I had never seen it!’
If you were the director of a production of Othello, how would you instruct the actress to deliver these lines? Pay special attention to body language and tone. Motivate your instructions. (3)
13.8 Critically comment on the extent to which deception ultimately leads to tragedy by referring to both extracts in your response. (4) [25]
THE CRUCIBLE – Arthur Miller
Answer EITHER QUESTION 14 (essay question) OR QUESTION 15 (contextual question).
QUESTION 14: THE CRUCIBLE – ESSAY QUESTION
John Proctor is both a victim and a villain in this drama.
Critically discuss the extent to which you agree with the above statement.
Your response should take the form of a well-constructed essay of 400–450 words (2–2½ pages). [25]
OR
QUESTION 15: THE CRUCIBLE – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Read the extracts below and then answer the questions that follow.
EXTRACT I
REBECCA: Pray, John, be calm. (Pause. He defers to her.) Mr Parris, I think you’d best send Reverend Hale back as soon as he come. This will set us all to arguin’ again in the society, and we thought to have peace this year. I think we ought rely on the doctor now, and good prayer. 5 [Act 1] |
15.1 Refer to lines 1–2: Account for Rebecca’s suggestion that Reverend Hale be sent back. (3)
15.2 Refer to lines 7–8: ‘There is prodigious danger in the seeking of loose spirits’. Comment on this warning in the light of later events. (3)
15.3 To what extent would you agree with Rebecca’s opinion in line 9 that they should blame themselves for the children’s behaviour? (3)
15.4 Account for Proctor’s attitude towards Putnam in lines 20–21: ‘We vote by name in this society and not by acreage’. (3)
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EXTRACT J
HALE The sun will rise in a few minutes. Excellency, I must have more time. [Act 4] |
15.5 While ‘I speak God’s law’ (line 9). Comment on the irony of Danforth’s utterance. (3)
15.6 Refer to lines 22–23: ‘You have closer knowledge of this man; might her presence soften him?’ To what extent is Goody Proctor able to influence her husband’s final decision? (3)
15.7 Refer to lines 1–2: ‘Excellency, I must have more time!’
If you were the director of a production of The Crucible, how would you instruct the actor to deliver these lines? Pay specific attention to body language and tone. Motivate your instructions. (3)
15.8 Critically comment on how deception ultimately leads to tragedy by referring to both extracts in your response. (4) [25]
TOTAL SECTION C: 25
GRAND TOTAL: 80
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
SECTION A: COMPREHENSION
QUESTION 1: READING FOR MEANING AND UNDERSTANDING
Read TEXTS A and B below and answer the questions set.
TEXT A
IF IT BLEEDS, IT LEADS: UNDERSTANDING FEAR-BASED MEDIA Managing depression requires you to mind your media intake.
[Source: https://www.psychologytoday.com] |
TEXT B
[Source: Psychology Today.com]
QUESTIONS: TEXT A
1.1 Refer to line 1: ‘Managing depression requires you to mind your media intake’. Explain the meaning of line 1 in your own words. (2)
1.2 Is the following statement TRUE or FALSE? Motivate your answer by quoting SEVEN consecutive words from paragraph 1. The news business is trustworthy. (2)
1.3 ‘News programming uses a hierarchy: if it bleeds, it leads’ (line 16). How does this slogan affect your understanding of news reporting? (2)
1.4 Critically comment on the motives of news agencies in paragraph 2 in the context of ethical values. (3)
1.5 In your view, what does the use of a ‘teaser’ imply about the news broadcasters (line 18)? (3)
1.6 What is your opinion on the practice of ‘stunting’ (line 30)? (3)
1.7 Why is the ‘crawl’ (paragraph 5) used specifically during entertainment programmes? (2)
1.8 Identify THREE results of fear-based media. Use your own words. (3)
1.9 Refer to paragraph 8. Discuss the writer’s intention in using this paragraph as the conclusion to his article. (3)
QUESTIONS: TEXT B
1.10 Refer to TWO visual clues and explain how these convey the man’s state of mind. (3)
QUESTION: TEXTS A AND B
1.11 Do you think that Text B is an accurate depiction of the message of Text A? Motivate your answer by referring to both texts. (4)
TOTAL SECTION A: 30
SECTION B: SUMMARY
QUESTION 2: SUMMARISING IN YOUR OWN WORDS
TEXT C provides insight into how the portrayal of the Disney princess has changed during the past thirty years. Summarise these changes in your own words.
NOTE:
TEXT C
Disney has taken many hits for their portrayal of women over the years, particularly the Disney princesses. However, there has been a shift at the Mouse House which shows Disney writers may have been listening to the critiques all these years. While some see 1989’s The Little Mermaid as the pinnacle of all that is wrong with Disney, it represents a turning point. The film is a marked departure from its predecessors: Ariel is the first truly rounded princess. She has opinions, flaws, and interests. While some see her giving up her life with her family for a man, she always wanted a different life from the one she had. Her encounter with Prince Eric is merely a call to action for something she might have done anyway. Whatever side of the argument you agree with, Ariel is a vast improvement over the meek, passive women who came before her. Even with these flaws, Ariel paved the way for a new breed of princess. Not the perfect embodiment of woman on screen, but a more balanced, active protagonist. Belle is a well-read, intelligent character who resists societal expectations. However misguided, she sacrifices herself to save her father. The film has its issues, but Belle is a strong character. Princess Jasmine in Aladdin is given more to do than faint and be a victim. She impresses with her intellect and wit. In fact, Aladdin is almost a swap of the gender norms seen in the early films, with the boy transforming in pursuit of love. Although none of these films are perfect in their portrayal of women, Disney clearly began thinking of how women were viewed as they progressed with their princess brand. How else can we explain their next two “princesses” after Jasmine being Pocahontas and Mulan? While not perfect, these women mark the greatest improvement in the character of the princess. Pocahontas is probably the only Disney princess never to question her worth as a person; rather, her insecurities stem from how to protect her people. Mulan subverts all societal expectations to pursue her own course (becoming a feminist). [Adapted from Passive Damsels to Active Heroes by Melissa Hugel, November 12, 2013] |
TOTAL SECTION B: 10
SECTION C: LANGUAGE STRUCTURES AND CONVENTIONS
QUESTION 3: ANALYSING ADVERTISING
Study the following advertisements (TEXTS D and E) and answer the questions set.
TEXT D
[Source: Best print ads of 2018]
3.1 Account for the Surfrider Foundation’s choice of logo. (2)
3.2 How does the slogan emphasise the message of this advertisement? (2)
TEXT E
[Source: Best print ads of 2018]
[www.ondazul.org.br]
QUESTIONS: TEXT E
3.3 Explain the effectiveness of the rhetorical question in the copy of this advertisement for canned sardines. (2)
QUESTION: TEXT D AND E
3.4 Critically comment on how the inclusion of plastic in the graphics in these two advertisements reinforces the advertisers’ message. (4) [10]
QUESTION 4: UNDERSTANDING OTHER ASPECTS OF THE MEDIA
Study TEXT F and answer the set questions.
TEXT F: CARTOON
[Source: Calvin and Hobbs cartoons]
QUESTIONS: TEXT F
4.1 Refer to FRAME 2. What does the use of the bold lettering and punctuation reveal about the boy’s (Calvin’s) attitude? (2)
4.2 Refer to FRAME 8. Explain the reason for the tiger’s conclusion. (2)
4.3 Refer to FRAME 7. Critically discuss the effectiveness of TWO techniques used by the cartoonist. (3)
4.4 Discuss the irony in the last frame. (3) [10]
QUESTION 5: USING LANGUAGE CORRECTLY
Read TEXT G, which contains some deliberate errors, and answer the questions set.
TEXT G
HONEST CHOCOLATE CAFÉ
[Adapted from http://honestchocolate.co.za] |
QUESTIONS: TEXT G
5.1 Honest Chocolate is a small artisanal Bean to Bar chocolate company based in Cape Town, South Africa. (lines 1–2) Identify the part of speech of the underlined word. (1)
5.2 ‘We believe in keeping things handcrafted, using old school methods, using quality organically produced ingredients and making a pure chocolate that has a deliciously distinct feel and taste.’ (lines 2–4) Study the above sentence, then choose the correct answer from the options provided. Write only the question number and the option of your choice.
This sentence is an example of a …
5.3 Which punctuation mark could be used to replace the dash in line 6 without changing the meaning of the sentence? (1)
5.4 ‘Our goal is to have ethical consideration for people and the environment by sourcing products local and fair.’ (lines 6–8) Rewrite this sentence so that it is grammatically correct. (1)
5.5 Identify and correct the spelling error in paragraph 3. (1)
5.6 Explain the different functions of the apostrophes in line 13. (2)
5.7 Quote ONE example from paragraph 6 to prove that the register is colloquial. (1)
5.8 Correct the sentence with the unrelated participle in paragraph 7. (1)
5.9 Correct the concord error in paragraph 8. (1) [10]
TOTAL SECTION C: 30
GRAND TOTAL: 70
INFORMATION FOR THE MARKER
In assessing a candidate’s work, the following aspects, among others, drawn from the assessment rubric, must be borne in mind:
SUGGESTED APPROACH TO MARKING
SECTION A: ESSAY
Refer to SECTION A: Rubric for Assessing an Essay found on page 8–9 of these marking guidelines.
CRITERIA USED FOR ASSESSMENT
CRITERIA | MARKS |
CONTENT AND PLANNING (60%) | 30 |
LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING (30%) | 15 |
STRUCTURE (10%) | 5 |
TOTAL | 50 |
Refer to SECTION B: Rubric for Assessing Transactional Texts found on page 10 of these marking guidelines.
CRITERIA USED FOR ASSESSMENT
CRITERIA | MARKS |
CONTENT, PLANNING AND FORMAT (60%) | 15 |
LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING (40%) | 10 |
TOTAL | 25 |
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SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
Candidates are required to write ONE essay of 400–450 words (2–2½ pages) on ONE of the given topics. Candidates may write in any genre: narrative, descriptive, reflective, discursive, argumentative, or any combination of these.
1.1 You know my name!
1.2 ‘Feeling my way through the darkness …’ (Avicii)
1.3 ‘We should invest in books not bullets.’ (Malala Yousafzai)
1.4 ‘Snowflake’ is an appropriate name for Generation Z – also known as the Post-Millennials.
1.5 Leave no man behind. (US Army Soldier’s Creed)
1.6
1.6.1 Hands gripping fence
1.6.2 Pen
1.6.3 Old man on bench
TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: TRANSACTIONAL TEXTS
QUESTION 2
Candidates are required to respond to TWO of the topics set. The body of each response should be 180–200 words (20–25 lines) in length. The language, register, style and tone must be appropriate to the context.
2.1 LETTER TO THE EDITOR
2.2 INFORMAL SPEECH
2.3 INFORMAL LETTER
2.4 OBITUARY
2.5 INTERVIEW
2.6 MAGAZINE ARTICLE
TOTAL SECTION B: 50
GRAND TOTAL: 100
SECTION A: ASSESSEMENT RUBRIC FOR ESSAY – HOME LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
NOTE:
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SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – HOME LANGUAGE [25 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT PLANNING AND FORMAT 15 MARKS | 13–15 | 10–12 | 7–9 | 4–6 | 0–3 |
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NOTE TO MARKERS
MARKING GUIDELINES
SECTION A: POETRY
PRESCRIBED POETRY
QUESTION 1: POETRY – ESSAY QUESTION
‘FUNERAL BLUES’ – W.H. Auden
‘Funeral Blues’ explores the speaker’s sense of loss at the death of a loved one. Through the use of diction, evocative imagery and its tone the poem shows how the depth of love increases the sense of loss and despair.
DICTION:
IMAGERY:
The speaker’s sense of sorrow and anguish is evident throughout the poem through a personal account of a special relationship. Daily existence without the loved one seems untenable to the speaker. The reader is left in no doubt as to the enormity of the loss.
[Credit valid alternative responses] [10]
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QUESTION 2: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
‘MOTHO KE MOTHO KA BATHO BABANG’ – Jeremy Cronin
2.1 Account for the mirror used by the man in the poem.
It allows for visual contact since the prisoners are able to see one another reflected in the mirror./It is used as a tool for their non-verbal communication.
[Award 2 marks for any one point well discussed.] (2)
2.2 Explain the warning implied in line 15 (‘He’s being watched’).
This is a warning that the warden is nearby. The prisoners’ secret communication is risky and could lead to further punishment if they are found out.
[Award 2 marks for two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
2.3 Explain how being imprisoned changes a ‘person’ (line 3) into a ‘prisoner’ (line 4).
A ‘person’ is a human being with value. Going to prison would strip the person of this humanity. The different words indicate how the person’s circumstances diminish his status.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
2.4 Critically comment on how the concept of Ubuntu is demonstrated in the poem. Refer to the tone in support of your answer.
Ubuntu refers to a universal bond that connects all humanity. Despite imprisonment and isolation, these human beings find a way to connect. It gives them the ability to feel human despite the degradation of prison life. They find their freedom in communication. This communication provides comfort, strength, hope and encouragement through the powerful symbol of ‘the black fist’ which shows solidarity.
The tone is defiant; hopeful.
[Award 1 mark for tone and 2 marks for two relevant explanations.] (3) [10]
QUESTION 3: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
‘FELIX RANDAL’ – Gerard Manley Hopkins
3.1 How does the description of Felix Randal as a ‘mould of man’ in line 2 suit his occupation?
The word ‘mould’ implies an ideal shape. His job as a farrier is physically strenuous. He is well built.
[Award 2 marks for two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
3.2 Felix Randal’s illness affected him in two ways. Explain.
The illness did not only result in his physical decline but also resulted in spiritual suffering/He could not cope with the effect of the illness on his body and it destroyed his mental strength.
[Award 2 marks for two relevant and distinct points.] (2)
3.3 Discuss the speaker’s observation in line 9 with reference to the sonnet structure of the poem.
Line 9 starts the sestet and therefore indicates a change in the speaker’s attitude.
The speaker experiences a conversion. He describes how caring for Felix Randal on a personal level, has made him truly compassionate. He admits he has become more compassionate as a result of his association with Felix Randal.
In the octave the speaker performs his priestly duty of ministering to a dying man by anointing him and offering him the Eucharist. The focus is on the duty. The speaker realises he has become more compassionate as a result of his association with Felix Randal.
[Award 3 marks only if octave and sestet are discussed.] (3)
3.4 How does the speaker’s memory of Felix Randal in lines 12–14 create the final tone in the poem?
Lines 12–14 show that the speaker’s memory of Felix Randal is of a ‘powerful’ man shoeing a ‘great grey drayhorse’. He chooses to remember him healthy instead of broken. The tone is optimistic.
[Award 2 marks for explanation and 1 mark for tone.] (3) [10]
QUESTION 4: POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
‘AN AFRICAN ELEGY’ – Ben Okri
4.1 Traditionally an elegy is a mournful poem written in response to death. How is this contradicted in the poem?
Unlike a traditional elegy which is mournful and often focuses on death, this poem is a reflection of the unique African spirit which finds beauty and joy in suffering. It is an optimistic account of the African experience rather than a sorrowful one.
[Award 2 marks for any two distinct and relevant points.] (2)
4.2 Refer to line 3: ‘We are precious.’
Consider the connotation of the word ‘precious’ and show how this statement is true of the African people in the context of the poem.
Precious refers to something rare and valuable. In this context it highlights the intrinsic value of the African people – the ability to express gratitude for what they have and the ability to find hope and joy in suffering. The speaker suggests that in their endurance and optimism, these people are rare and unusual. They have worth and value.
[Award 2 marks for any two distinct and relevant points.] (2)
4.3 In line 20, the speaker refers to the dead in a joyful rather than a sad way. How does this contribute to your understanding of African people?
Ancestors play an important role in African tradition. They do not mourn those who have died since they still play an important role in daily life. They obey what they feel are messages from their ancestors. They give advice from their omniscient perspective. Their ancestors provide a connection with the past as well as in the present and the future, offering wisdom, encouragement and hope. Therefore, the ancestors are celebrated and death is not sad.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
4.4 Refer to the last stanza. How do the images of nature create the final tone?
The ocean and the sky represent the natural universe. It is seen as friendly, ‘not an enemy’. It is joyful, ‘full of songs’. The final tone is one of confidence; contentment; joy.
[Award 1 mark for tone and 2 marks for the two references to nature.] (3) [10]
QUESTION 5: UNSEEN POETRY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
‘SOME LIKE POETRY’ – Wislawa Szymborska
5.1 Refer to line 4: In your own words explain what the attitude of learners is to poetry.
Poetry is not something they are able to choose to do so they probably do not enjoy it. The line ‘where one has to’ suggests that if they were given a choice they would prefer not to do poetry.
[Award 2 marks for any two distinct and relevant points.] (2)
5.2 What is the speaker implying by listing some of the things one likes in stanza 2?
The list includes ordinary things which are simple and yet provide comfort and pleasure. The speaker wonders whether liking poetry could be comparable to these simple pleasures.
[Award 2 marks for any two distinct and relevant points.] (2)
5.3 Comment on the effectiveness of the image in lines 17–18.
The speaker admits that she does not always understand poetry, just like life. The image shows that poetry is something she chooses to hold onto for support when life becomes uncertain.
[Award no more than 2 marks if only literal interpretation
Award 3 marks for any two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
5.4 How does the structure of the poem reinforce the central idea?
Each stanza leads with the consecutive words of the title. The first stanza shows how only ‘some’ people would enjoy poetry, the second shows the simple things people ‘like’ and the third shows that an attempt to define poetry may be elusive but it does not detract from the power that poetry has to cope with life’s uncertainties.
[Award 3 marks for three ideas related to each stanza.] (3) [10]
TOTAL SECTION A: 30
SECTION B: NOVEL
THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – Oscar Wilde
QUESTION 6 – ESSAY QUESTION: THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY
Candidates must make reference to aspects from the quote, i.e. the painting’s transformation, and the ‘face without the heart’.
QUESTION 7: THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
7.1 Refer to lines 1–2: ‘But he would not sin.’
Account for the decision Dorian makes at this point in the novel.
Dorian cruelly rejected Sibyl after what he perceived as a poor stage performance. He notices the expression on the portrait had changed ‘with the touch of cruelty in the mouth’. When he sees the affect his actions have on the portrait, he is appalled and resolves to make amends to Sibyl.
[Award 3 marks for two well discussed ideas OR three ideas.] (3)
7.2 Refer to lines 3–4: ‘He would not see Lord Henry any more’. In your view, is Dorian’s decision not to see Lord Henry realistic? Motivate your response.
YES
It is realistic. Dorian has chosen to return to Sibyl. At this stage he has a conscience and admits that he has hurt her. He believes by returning to her, their relationship will be restored. He believes she would fascinate him again; he feels a duty to return to her.
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NO
It is unrealistic. Lord Henry still has a strong influence over Dorian. He openly disapproves of Dorian’s relationship with Sibyl Vane. He will probably interfere and try to derail the relationship. Dorian’s expectations are based on a very slim understanding of who Sibyl and he really are.
[Accept mixed/valid alternative responses.]
[Award 3 marks for two well discussed ideas OR three ideas.] (3)
7.3 Refer to line 7: ‘She must have suffered more than he had.’ Critically comment on how Dorian’s ability to show concern here is contradicted later in the novel.
Here he is still able to empathise. He is concerned about Sibyl’s well-being. Later his self-absorption is all-encompassing and destructive. His involvement with Alan Campbell and Adrian Singleton proves the dire consequences of his heartlessness; similarly, so does Basil’s murder.
[Award 3 marks for two well discussed ideas OR three ideas.] (3)
7.4 Refer to lines 7–8: ‘Poor child!’
Explain what Dorian’s expression indicates about his attitude towards Sibyl.
Dorian’s tone expresses pity/compassion/sympathy. However, his attitude towards their relationship is superficial based on the quality of her performance on stage and not who she truly is. His reference to her as a child is indulgent and patronising. He does not view her as his equal.
[Award 3 marks only if attitude is discussed.] (3)
7.5 Place this extract in context.
Dorian had just stabbed Basil to death. He wants Alan to help him dispose of Basil’s body in the attic. He has blackmailed Alan into acquiescing to this awful request.
[Award 3 marks for three relevant and distinct ideas.] (3)
7.6 Account for Campbell’s ‘cold’ attitude towards Dorian.
Initially Alan refuses to give in to Dorian’s request to dispose of Basil’s body. However, when Dorian hands him a note, ‘(a) horrible sense of sickness came over him’. It is evident that Dorian has damning evidence against him that has caused him to avoid Dorian up to now. The information contained in the note is the reason for Alan’s revulsion.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
7.7 Comment on Dorian’s reference to the dead body as ‘the silent thing’ in line 11.
He has just murdered an old friend, not a ‘thing’. His reference to Basil as a ‘thing’ shows how callous he is, and how quickly he is able to distance himself from the damage that he causes. He has silenced Basil’s attempts to get him to redeem himself by killing him. He avoids any situation where he is forced to confront himself. He has lost his humanity.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
7.8 ‘Even though Dorian is able to avoid justice, there is no escape from his conscience.’
Critically comment on this statement by referring to the mood created in both extracts.
EXTRACT A:
Even though Dorian expresses pity and regret (‘Poor child!’) as he reflects on how he had treated Sibyl, the mood is hopeful and optimistic. Dorian resolves to make amends and a fresh start. This positive mood is reflected in the description of the ‘fresh morning air’, the birds singing and ‘the dew drenched garden’.
EXTRACT B:
Here the mood is grim and forbidding, evidenced by descriptions of the ‘portrait leering’, ‘grotesque misshapen shadow’ and ‘loathsome red dew’. This is the point of no return for Dorian’s soul. The mood reflects the finality of the murder. He has to confront the horror of what he has become.
[Award 4 marks only if reference is made to the mood in both extracts.] (4) [25]
LIFE OF PI – Yann Martel
QUESTION 8: LIFE OF PI – ESSAY QUESTION
Candidates must make reference to aspects from the quote, i.e. the corrosion of his soul.
[Credit valid alternative responses.] [25]
QUESTION 9: LIFE OF PI – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
9.1 Why is Pondicherry no longer Pi’s home?
Pi grew up in Pondicherry. His parents decided that the family should emigrate to Canada. Pi was the only survivor after the sinking of the Tsimtsum. After Pi’s rescue, he could not return to Pondicherry, because there was nothing for him there.
[Award 3 marks for three distinct relevant points.] (3)
9.2 Refer to line 7. Provide a possible explanation for Pi’s observation that he still sees Richard Parker in his dreams.
His life is inextricably tied up with Richard Parker’s. Pi’s survival was determined by the ongoing tension between him and the menacing tiger. Pi’s subconscious is still grappling with the tiger because the tiger is in fact Pi’s alter ego, thus the dreams.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
9.3 Despite their serious conditions (such as cancer) many patients seek to visit Pi in order to comfort him. What is it about Pi’s story that they find so compelling?
Although they suffer serious illnesses, they are inspired by Pi’s story, because if he could survive such a nightmare, they might too. They want to see a survivor in order to make their own survival more real.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
9.4 To what extent is Pi able to recover adequately after his rescue? Explain your answer.
He recovers sufficiently to study, have a family and lead a conventional life. He is, by his own admission, always reminded of Richard Parker. His house has religious artifacts that show his spirituality, which was in evidence when he was a boy in Pondicherry and it still sustains him. He has managed to keep intact despite his unspeakable suffering on the boat.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
9.5 Place this extract in context.
Pi eventually reaches Mexico. Officials representing the shipping company of the Tsimtsum come to Mexico to question the recovering Pi. They find his story of his 227 days at sea too implausible to believe and Pi tells them a second story.
[Award 3 marks for three distinct and relevant ideas.] (3)
9.6 Refer to line 18: ‘And so it goes with God.’
Comment on what Pi’s tone reveals about his relationship with God.
His tone is confident. The only constant presence during his ordeal on the boat has been an awareness of God’s presence. Even the investigators’ skepticism is not enough to shake his unwavering belief. It is the only thing that he has to show after 227 incredulous days.
[Award 3 marks only if tone is identified.] (3)
9.7 What does the ‘[long silence]’ in line 24 indicate about the investigators’ understanding of Pi’s version of events?
The silence occurs because Pi cries. Up to now he has been very confident and in control. His emotions indicate that there must be some truth to what he has been telling them. They are uncomfortable because he could be speaking the truth and their disbelief is challenged. They are moved by his crying.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
9.8 Critically comment on the mood in both extracts and show how this is essential to understand Pi’s survival.
EXTRACT C: The mood is reflective, warm and sincere. Pi relates his experience in hospital with appreciation. He is touched by people’s kindness and interest. He copes with the painful reminder of Richard Parker.
EXTRACT D: The extract contains an element of humour as Pi challenges the very serious investigators who come looking for the ‘straight facts’. The fact that Pi has survived this ordeal is in itself a far-fetched reality which defies explanation. Pi is light-hearted with the investigators who do not seem to get his point that there can be more truth and significance behind a story than just the ‘dry, yeastless’ facts.
OR
Pi starts crying because he is overcome with relief. He might even be saddened by his recollection of his terrible experience. The investigators are taken aback by his display of emotions; it changes the initial light-hearted mood to one of sadness.
[Award 4 marks only if reference is made to the mood in both extracts.] (4) [25]
TOTAL SECTION B: 25
SECTION C: DRAMA
QUESTION 10: HAMLET – ESSAY QUESTION
Candidates may argue that Hamlet is a victim who is helpless and suffers due to the actions of others or that he is a deliberately cruel and malicious person.
VICTIM:
VILLAIN:
Credit mixed/valid alternative responses. [25]
QUESTION 11: HAMLET – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
11.1 This spectacular scene opens showing Prince Hamlet dressed in black. Explain the dramatic effect that is created by presenting Hamlet in this way.
Hamlet stands aloof in contrast to the glitter and brilliance of the court. Hamlet, dressed in black in this context, emphasises his isolation and it highlights his suffering. The colour, black, is funereal. It is evident that he is still in mourning for his father.
[Award 3 marks for three relevant and distinct ideas.] (3)
11.2 Refer to line 1: ‘our dear brother’s death’. Account for the irony in this line.
Claudius conveys his love (‘dear’) for his brother who has died but he is not sincere. He has shown no love when he cruelly killed his relative in order to usurp his position.
[Award 3 marks only if irony is fully discussed.] (3)
11.3 Refer to line 9: ‘this warlike state’.
Discuss how this line may have both a literal and figurative interpretation.
The state is literally at war since Fortinbras has prepared to avenge the loss of Norwegian lands to Hamlet’s father when he was king. Figuratively, the state is ‘disjointed’ since Claudius usurped the throne and caused confusion in the natural order of things. Denmark is thrown into disarray.
Hamlet, too, experiences an emotional battle as he vacillates between reason and avenging the death of his father. (1 mark)
[Award 3 marks only if both the literal and figurative interpretation is discussed.] (3)
11.4 ‘Now follows that you know young Fortinbras, Holding a weak supposal of our worth,’ (lines 17–18)
In these lines Claudius indicates that Fortinbras is not a threat to Denmark nor to Claudius. How is this assumption proven to be incorrect at the end of the play?
Claudius is over-confident and arrogant. He views ‘young Fortinbras’ as immature yet it is Fortinbras who becomes the next Danish king. He proves to be a good leader, deserving of Hamlet’s endorsement at the end to restore stability and morality to Denmark.
[Award 3 marks for three relevant ideas.] (3)
11.5 Why does Claudius align himself with Laertes at this point in the play?
Hamlet has killed Laertes’ father, Polonius. Laertes is devastated. Claudius uses Laertes’ grief to his advantage by convincing Laertes to avenge his father’s death. Hamlet is a threat to Claudius maintaining the throne. He wants Hamlet killed before Hamlet exposes Claudius.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
11.6 Comment on the significance of Gertrude’s appearance at this stage.
Claudius convinced Laertes that he is unable to take action against Hamlet because of the love that Gertrude has for Hamlet. Gertrude’s appearance at this stage highlights the horror of the lengths Claudius will go to protect himself and how truly immoral he is. He disregards the effect Hamlet’s death will have on Gertrude and shows how self-serving he is. Her appearance at this stage also foreshadows her death from the poisoned cup that is part of Claudius’ plan to kill Hamlet.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three ideas.] (3)
11.7 Refer to Laertes’ response to his sister’s death in line 28: ‘Drowned? O, where?’
If you were the director of a production of Hamlet, how would you instruct the actor to deliver these lines? Pay specific attention to body language and tone. Motivate your instructions.
His eyes might be large to show his shock at the news. His arms may be outstretched or he may be slumped over in devastation. His curt response may indicate that he is still processing the vengeful plan against Hamlet and he is not quite prepared for more sad news. His tone might be bitter, grave or shocked.
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate refers to both body language and tone, and includes a justification.] (3)
11.8 Show how deception ultimately leads to tragedy by referring to both extracts in your response.
EXTRACT E:
Claudius appears to be an honourable, dutiful king who is prepared to put aside his grief for the sake of the welfare of Denmark. He deceptively shrouds his culpability in the death of his brother and sets the stage for even more devious acts leading to tragedy.
EXTRACT F:
Here Claudius deceives Laertes into believing that Hamlet is his enemy that should be eliminated. He plots what would appear to be an innocent fencing match which does ultimately lead to many deaths, including his own.
[Award 4 marks only if both extracts are discussed.] (4) [25]
OTHELLO – William Shakespeare
QUESTION 12: OTHELLO – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
Candidates may argue that Othello is a victim who is helpless and suffers due to the actions of others or that he is a deliberately cruel and malicious person.
VICTIM:
VILLAIN:
[Credit mixed/valid alternative responses.] [25]
QUESTION 13: OTHELLO – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
13.1 The word ‘jealousy’ is repeated in this extract. To what extent does Iago’s own jealousy lead to this encounter with Othello?
Iago is jealous because he was overlooked for promotion as lieutenant; Cassio was chosen instead. It is rumoured that his wife, Emilia, has been unfaithful to him with Othello. He is envious of Othello’s happy relationship with Desdemona. He views Othello as an outsider who is not deserving of the respect he has been accorded in Venice.
[Award 3 marks for three relevant and distinct ideas.] (3)
13.2 Explain how Iago will provide the proof that Othello demands in line 16.
Iago repeatedly asks Emilia to give him the handkerchief that was Othello’s first gift to Desdemona. He plants it in Cassio’s room. Iago tells Othello he saw Cassio wipe his beard with it. Cassio eventually gives it to Bianca, his prostitute friend.
[Award 3 marks for three relevant and distinct ideas.] (3)
13.3 Refer to line 19: ‘To show the love and duty that I bear you.’ How is Iago’s character revealed in this line?
Throughout the drama, Iago shows no love and duty towards anyone. He is duplicitous. He is depicted as the consummate villain who particularly bends Othello to his will. He is jealous of Othello and will stop at nothing to destroy Othello and his happiness with Desdemona. He continually plants seeds of doubt in Othello and fuels his jealousy so that the once loving husband and brave warrior is transformed into an irrational and cruel man. Othello and many others stand no chance against Iago’s evil machinations.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.4 Refer to lines 24–25: ‘I would not have your free and noble nature/Out of self-bounty be abused.’
Comment on the irony in this line.
Iago suggests here that Desdemona is abusing Othello’s good nature by deceiving him. However, it is Iago who is corrupting Othello’s nature. He transforms him into a jealous fiend who kills Desdemona.
[Award 3 marks only if irony is fully discussed.] (3)
13.5 Account for the significance of Desdemona offering a handkerchief to Othello at this point in the drama.
This is a different handkerchief; not the ocular proof which Othello demands. It was once a symbol of Othello’s love for Desdemona; it is now an object of suspicion and destruction. When she innocently hands a different handkerchief to him it serves to confirm Iago’s conviction that Venetian women are not to be trusted. The jealous monster Othello has become is now hell-bent on revenge and Iago has achieved his aims.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.6 Othello’s reference to the magical properties of the handkerchief in line 17 is a reminder of earlier references made to magic when he eloped with Desdemona. Discuss.
When Brabantio first learned about his daughter’s elopement with Othello, he was convinced she was bewitched by this foreigner. He did not want to believe that his daughter would deceive him. He attributes her actions to a magical potion prepared by Othello that must have affected her senses and enabled Othello to control her. To Othello the handkerchief is magical since it is a symbol of the love they once shared. After the handkerchief is lost Othello believes Desdemona has given that love away.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed OR three ideas.] (3)
13.7 Refer to line 25: ‘Then would to God that I had never seen it!’
If you were the director of a production of Othello, how would you instruct the actress to deliver these lines? Pay special attention to body language and tone. Motivate your instructions.
Her tone would be sorrowful/distressed that the loss of the handkerchief would mark the end of their love. She would move closer to Othello and reach out to him to show that despite his strange behaviour she still loves him and is loyal to him. She could throw down the handkerchief she is holding to show that she is troubled by how such an object could define the direction of their relationship.
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate refers to body language and tone, and includes a justification.] (3)
13.8 Critically comment on the extent to which deception ultimately leads to tragedy by referring to both extracts in your response.
EXTRACT G:
Iago appears to have Othello’s best interests at heart by cautioning him about Desdemona’s faithfulness (‘Look to your wife. Observe her well with Cassio.’). He is aware of Othello’s insecurities and jealousies and uses it to his advantage to sow seeds of suspicion (‘She did deceive her father’) which ultimately leads to Desdemona’s death and Othello’s destruction.
EXTRACT H:
Othello hides his anger beneath a calm demeanour as he questions Desdemona about the handkerchief. She is unaware of his motives as he spins a web of deceit about the magical properties of the handkerchief in an attempt to get her to confess to infidelity. She maintains her innocence. This enrages him even more and he orders the murder of a trusted loyal general, Cassio, and fools himself into believing that he is the instrument of divine justice when he kills Desdemona.
[Award full marks only if reference is made to both extracts.] (4) [25]
THE CRUCIBLE – Arthur Miller
QUESTION 14: THE CRUCIBLE – ESSAY QUESTION
Candidates may argue that John Proctor is a victim who is helpless and suffers due to the actions of others or that he is a deliberately cruel and malicious person.
VICTIM:
VILLAIN:
[Credit mixed/valid alternative responses.] [25]
QUESTION 15: THE CRUCIBLE – CONTEXTUAL QUESTION
15.1 Refer to lines 1–2: Account for Rebecca’s suggestion that Reverend Hale be sent back.
Reverend Hale is known as the expert in detecting witchcraft. Rebecca, as the voice of reason in the community, recognises that his mere presence may arouse suspicion and fear among the villagers. She mentions previous arguments and the need for the Salem community to be a more peaceful one.
[Award 3 marks only if reference is made to both Rev. Hale and Rebecca.] (3)
15.2 Refer to lines 7–8: ‘There is prodigious danger in the seeking of loose spirits’. Comment on this warning in the light of later events.
This warning proves to be well-founded. People turn against each other. They become irrational. People who are accused are forced into false confessions, others lose their lives. It is also an opportunity for jealousies and vengeances to surface as accusations of witchcraft become a means to exact justice against rivals.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three distinct ideas.] (3)
15.3 To what extent would you agree with Rebecca’s opinion in line 10 that they should blame themselves for the children’s behaviour?
AGREE
The adults would blame themselves because they raise the children in a strict Puritan community. They are not allowed any freedom to express themselves. They are forced to live according to rigid Biblical commandments. Their rebellion is a natural inclination against such inflexible rules. Betty’s refusal to wake up in this extract shows her fear for the consequences of being caught dancing. Conflict amongst the adults in the community has not been a positive example to the children.
OR
DISAGREE
Rebecca underestimates the destruction children like Abigail and her acolytes are capable of. Their actions in the woods are not innocent. Abigail wanted a potion that would cause the death of Elizabeth. The Biblical commandments taught should have instilled sound moral values in the children so that they would make principled choices.
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three distinct ideas. Consider a valid/mixed response.] (3)
15.4 Account for Proctor’s attitude towards Putnam in line 20–21: ‘We vote by name in this society and not by acreage’.
To Proctor, a man’s integrity and reputation are important. His attitude towards Putnam is derisive/contemptuous/scornful. Proctor does not hesitate to confront him. Putnam is a greedy and vindictive landowner who encourages the witchcraft allegations so that he can buy up their land.
[Award 3 marks for three relevant and distinct ideas.] (3)
15.5 ‘While I speak God’s law’ (line 9). Comment on the irony of Danforth’s utterance.
Danforth does not speak God’s law. He enforces punishment based on lies and not the truth. God’s law is based on the truth.
[Award 3 marks only if irony is discussed.] (3)
15.6 Refer to lines 22–23: ‘You have closer knowledge of this man; might her presence soften him?’
To what extent is Goody Proctor able to influence her husband’s final decision?
Despite Elizabeth’s initial mistrust after her husband’s infidelity, this ordeal has strengthened rather than broken the bonds of their marriage. Although naturally distressed by the death he faces, she respects his decision to restore his honour and gain the respect of his family and community. It is her understanding and support that allow him to choose to do the right thing rather than take the easy way out by confessing.
It is also the integrity shown by people like Rebecca and Giles that convinces Proctor to make the decision to uphold the truth and die with honour. (1 mark)
[Award 3 marks for two ideas well discussed or three distinct ideas.] (3)
15.7 Refer to lines 1–2: ‘Excellency, I must have more time!’
If you were the director of a production of The Crucible, how would you instruct the actor to deliver these lines? Pay specific attention to body language and tone. Motivate your instructions.
Hale may look anxious/apprehensive/desperate and frustrated. He may have his arms outstretched to intensify his plea for time. He might sound panic stricken at the thought of more innocent people losing their lives. He feels guilty for his own part in contributing to the witch-hunts. His realises that he is running out of time to save innocent lives and makes a last desperate petition to the courts.
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate refers to both body language and tone, and includes a justification.] (3)
15.8 Critically comment on how deception ultimately leads to tragedy by referring to both extracts in your response.
EXTRACT I:
It is Betty’s feigned illness that arouses suspicion and fear among the villagers and the initial accusations of witchcraft. This seemingly close-knit community is fractured by witchcraft allegations.
EXTRACT J:
The justice system is meant to be objective and fair yet it is subverted by lies and false testimony. This injustice is perpetuated by the judges who would rather preserve their reputations than uphold the truth. (‘Postponement now speaks a floundering on my part’). Many innocent people lose their lives as a result.
[Award 4 marks only if reference is made to both extracts.] (4) [25]
TOTAL SECTION C: 25
GRAND TOTAL: 80
RUBRIC FOR MARKING THE POETRY ESSAY
RUBRIC FOR MARKING THE POETRY ESSAY HOME LANGUAGE 10 MARKS | LANGUAGE Structure, logical flow and presentation. Language, tone and style used in the essay | Outstanding
| Meritorious
| Substantial
| Adequate
| Moderate
| Elementary
| Not achieved
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CONTENT Interpretation of topic. Depth of argument, justification and grasp of poem. | 7 80–100% | 6 70–79% | 5 60–69% | 4 50–59% | 3 40–49% | 2 30–39% | 1 0–29% | |
Outstanding - In-depth interpretation of topic, all aspects fully explored. - Outstanding response: 90%+. Excellent response: 80–89%. - Range of striking arguments extensively supported from poem. - Excellent understanding of genre and poem. | 7 | 8–10 | 7–7½ | 7–8 | ||||
Meritorious - Above average interpretation of topic, all aspects adequately explored. - Detailed response. - Range of sound arguments given, well supported from poem. - Very good understanding of genre and poem. | 6 | -7½–8½ | 7–8 | 6½–7½ | 6–7 | |||
Substantial - Shows understanding and has interpreted topic well. - Fairly detailed response. - Some sound arguments given, but not all of them as well motivated as they could be. - Understanding of genre and poem evident. | 5 | 7–8 | 6½–7½ | 6–7 | 5½–6½ | 5–6 |
Adequate
| 4 | 6–7 | 5½–6 ½ | 5–6 | 4½–5 ½ | 4–5 | ||
Moderate
| 3 | 5–6 | 4½–5½ | 4–5 | 3½–4½ | 3–4 | ||
Elementary
| 2 | 4–5 | 3½–4½ | 3–4 | 1–3½ | |||
Not achieved
| 1 | 3–4 | 1–3½ | 0–3 |
CODES AND MARK ALLOCATION | CONTENT [15] | STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE [10] Structure, logical flow and presentation. Language, tone and style used in the essay | ||
Code 7 80–100% | Outstanding 12–15 marks |
| Outstanding 8–10 marks |
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Code 6 70–79% | Meritorious 10½–11½ marks |
| Meritorious 7–7½ marks |
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Code 5 60–69% | Substantial 9–10 marks |
| Substantial 6–6½ marks |
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Code 4 50–59% | Adequate 7½–8½ marks |
| Adequate 5–5½ marks |
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Code 3 40–49% | Moderate 6–7 marks |
| Moderate 4–4½ marks |
|
Code 2 30–39% | Elementary 4½–5½ marks |
| Elementary 3–3½ marks |
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Code 1 0–29% | Not achieved 0–4 marks |
| Not achieved 0–2½ marks |
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NOTE: If a candidate has ignored the content completely and written a creative essay instead, award a 0 for both content, and structure and language.
NOTE:
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS
Marking the comprehension:
SECTION A: COMPREHENSION
QUESTION 1: READING FOR MEANING AND UNDERSTANDING QUESTIONS:
TEXT A
1.1 If you suffer from depression, you have to monitor/limit the time spent on media. ✔✔ (2)
1.2 False: ‘doesn't always succeed in reporting facts accurately’. ✔✔ (2)
1.3 Knowing that this is the starting point for news reporting helps the reader to evaluate all stories heard on the news, realising that sensationalism is the aim. ✔In this way, the reader is able to evaluate the news objectively without becoming emotionally involved ✔
[Award one mark for recognising the sensationalism and one mark for the need to remain objective.] (2)
1.4 The news business is so concerned about profits and increased ratings that any search for truth is excluded. ✔✔
This causes them to become unethical and unreliable. ✔ (3)
1.5 The teaser ensures that listeners/viewers tune in to the news programme to allay the fears caused by the ‘teaser’ in the first place. ✔
It implies that the broadcasters are unscrupulous as they blatantly manipulate and prey on people’s vulnerabilities. ✔✔
[Award 3 marks only if the candidate has expressed an opinion on the news broadcasters.] (3)
1.6 ‘Stunting’ is the practice of using pre-scripted, pre-prepared news stories with misleading information. ✔This is a deplorable practice as it is nothing short of lying. ✔ It creates anxiety in viewers. ✔
[Candidates must identify/explain the practice of ‘stunting’ for 1 mark.]
[A well-developed value judgement of this practice = 2 marks ] (3)
1.7 The purpose of these ‘crawls’ is to serve as advertising for upcoming news programmes. ✔ Since there are many viewers ✔ during entertainment slots, many people will hopefully be drawn to watch the news programmes. (2)
1.8 Fear-based media causes people to feel that their environments/ communities are not safe. ✔
[Credit any THREE points.] (3)
1.9 The writer wants to provide solutions to readers who feel overwhelmed by the bad news they encounter every day. ✔ He ends his article on a positive note – unlike most news articles these days. ✔✔
[A candidate can only earn 3 marks for a well-developed answer.] (3)
1.10 The exclamation marks/the toast which pops out of the toaster/the man’s open mouth/huge eyes ✔✔depict his shock ✔ at reading about his non existent affair in the newspaper.
[Candidates must refer to how any TWO visual clues reveal the man’s state of mind.] (3)
1.11 Yes, it is an accurate depiction.
[Note: No mark is awarded for YES/NO.]
[Candidates need to highlight the similarities in BOTH Text A and Text B and draw a conclusion about the similarities between the two texts.] [A cogent ‘No’ response is unlikely. However, treat all responses on their merits.] (4)
TOTAL SECTION A: 30
SECTION B: SUMMARY
QUESTION 2: SUMMARISING IN YOUR OWN WORDS
Use the following main points that the candidate should include in the summary as a guideline.
Any 7 valid points are to be credited in paragraph-form.
(Sentences and/or sentence fragments must be coherent.)
NO. | QUOTATIONS | NO. | POINTS |
1 | ‘Ariel is the first truly rounded princess.’/‘She has opinions, flaws, and interests.’ | 1 | She is an ordinary person with her own ideas./She is not perfect./She has her own interests. |
2 | ‘Her encounter with Prince Eric is merely a call to action’/‘Ariel is a vast improvement over the meek, passive women who came before her.’ | 2 | She takes matters into her own hands./She is no longer timid and submissive. |
3 | ‘a more balanced, active protagonist.’ | 3 | She is a balanced person./She takes charge of her own life. |
4 | ‘well-read … character’ | 4 | She has read widely. |
5 | ‘intelligent character’/ ‘She impresses with her intellect and wit.’ | 5 | She is intelligent/can think for herself. |
6 | ‘resists societal expectations.’/ ‘subverts all societal expectations to pursue her own course.’ | 6 | She does not do what society expects of her./She does not conform to societal norms. |
7 | ‘a strong character’ | 7 | She has a strong personality/ strong psyche. |
8 | ‘never to question her worth as a person’ | 8 | She does not doubt her own self worth. |
9 | ‘becoming a feminist.’ | 9 | She has become a feminist. |
PARAGRAPH-FORM
NOTE: What follows is merely an example. It is not prescriptive and must be used very carefully.
The Disney princess has developed into an ordinary, flawed person with her own ideas and interests. No longer timid and submissive, she has become a balanced woman who takes matters into her own hands and takes charge of her own life. The new Disney princess is intelligent, widely read and thinks for herself. Moreover, as a woman with a strong personality, she does not conform to society’s expectations. She no longer questions her own self-worth, but has truly become a feminist. (81 words) |
Marking the summary:
Marking is on the basis of the inclusion of valid material and the exclusion of invalid material.
The summary must be marked as follows:
NOTE:
TOTAL SECTION B: 10
SECTION C: LANGUAGE STRUCURES AND CONVENTIONS
Marking SECTION C:
QUESTION 3: ANALYSING ADVERTISING
3.1 The organisation’s logo is the stylised image of a wave breaking. It is a representation of a surfer riding the waves. ✔✔ (2)
3.2 Through the slogan, ‘Rise above plastics’, the Surfrider foundation aims to raise awareness about pollution in the oceans of the world, especially plastic pollution. ✔ Their slogan is intended to encourage people to stop the use of plastic material/packaging to prevent plastic pollution in the oceans. ✔
[Credit candidates who refer to the representation of the slogan within a plastic bottle.] (2)
3.3 The rhetorical question draws attention to the prominence of plastic pollution. ✔ It emphasises the problem and makes the reader aware of the dangers. ✔ (2)
3.4 Both texts emphasise that humans ultimately eat what the fish ingest. ✔ The visuals of both advertisements show plastic pollution in an unexpected way. ✔
Both advertisers effectively succeed in creating awareness of the drastic effects and health hazards of plastic pollution in the oceans. ✔✔
[Award one mark for the purpose of the advertisers.]
[Award one mark for a reference to the use of plastic in both visuals.]
[Award two marks for a critical comment evaluating the message of the advertisers.] (4) [10]
QUESTION 4: UNDERSTANDING OTHER ASPECTS OF THE MEDIA
4.1 The bold lettering emphasises Calvin’s anger/frustration ✔ because he is too young to smoke. The punctuation conveys his questioning of the law ✔ which he regards as unfair. (2)
4.2 Hobbes is confused about why people are not able to stop smoking ✔ when it causes such a violent reaction. ✔ (2)
4.3 The cartoonist uses sound effects and body language: Calvin’s mouth is wide open/He is coughing and spluttering/He coughs so violently that he lifts off the ground/His tongue is crooked/His eyes are wide and bulging/He is coughing up smoke/He is clutching his chest in agony. ✔ These clues convey the ferocity/franticness/violence/frenzy of his reaction to smoking. ✔✔
[Award 1 mark for identifying sound effects and body language.]
[Award 2 marks for a well-developed discussion of both techniques.] (3)
4.4 The irony causes humour because Calvin’s mother’s intention when giving him permission to smoke was to teach him a lesson. ✔ Calvin, however, perceives it as proof that parents are not to be trusted. ✔ He does not perceive it as a warning about the health risks of smoking. ✔ (3) [10]
QUESTION 5: USING LANGUAGE CORRECTLY
5.1 Adjective (1)
5.2 B – compound sentence (1)
5.3 Comma (1)
5.4 ‘Our goal is to have ethical consideration for people and the environment by sourcing products locally and fairly.’
OR
‘Our goal is to have ethical consideration for people and the environment by sourcing local products fairly.’ (1)
5.5 Practise (1)
5.6 We’re – omission/contraction people’s – possession (2)
5.7 ‘a bit of’/‘polished off’/‘on to something’ (1)
5.8 When he/Michael returned to Cape Town, the opportunity came to join Anthony on his chocolate adventure. On Michael’s/his return to Cape Town, the opportunity came to join Anthony on his chocolate adventure. (1)
5.9 something that continually changes (1) [10]
TOTAL SECTION C: 30
GRAND TOTAL: 70
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS
MARKING THE COMPREHENSION
SECTION A: COMPREHENSION
QUESTION 1
1.1
1.1.1 Morné Kahts is a (medical) doctor ?and Lucky Felisono is his patient. (2)
1.1.2 B/excited and happy (1)
1.2 To show that these words are written in a different language (than the rest of the text).
OR
To show that the text is in English, but these are Xhosa words.
NOTE: Accept any ONE of the above answers. (1)
1.3 It refers to the time in South Africa after the end of apartheid. (2)
1.4 English-speaking medical students are expected to live with an Afrikaans- or Xhosa-speaking health worker.
They should stay with their host for two-and-a-half weeks.
They have to do research at a community clinic. (3)
1.5 They are allowed to speak English when there is an emergency. (1)
1.6 Sign language has to be included so that doctors can communicate with patients who are deaf/hard of hearing/have a problem with the spoken language. (1)
1.7 Relationships improve when the doctors speak the language of the people in the different communities they work. (2)
1.8 They communicate much better. They have a better relationship. ? (2)
1.9 ‘sings in vernacular’ (1)
1.10 Doctors are under oath to keep all information related to a patient’s illness confidential. An interpreter could very easily divulge information to strangers. (2)
1.11 Patients understand Dr Kahts because he explains their medical condition in a way that is easy to understand, while other doctors use difficult medical terms which patients do not understand. (2)
1.12 Open-ended. Accept a suitable response, e.g.
Yes. It is a good idea because patients want to know that the doctor understands them. This gives them the confidence that the treatment will be what they need and that it will be effective.
OR
No. A doctor’s job is to provide the best possible treatment to his patients. There is no evidence that if a doctor cannot speak the language of the patient that treatment will be any different/or ineffective.
NOTE: Accept other suitable responses. A candidate can score 1 mark for an answer that is not well-substantiated.
Accept a combination answer. (2)
1.13 Open-ended. Accept a suitable response, e.g.
Yes. The title is suitable because it is linked to the article which provides the reader with information on the benefits of doctors being able to speak the same language as their patients. The article also provides facts based on the personal experience of Dr Kahts and his patients.
OR
No. The title is not suitable because it only focuses on the experience of one doctor and his patient. This might not be the same for all doctors and patients. All doctors are trained to provide the same treatment, so the language that they speak plays a minor role.
NOTE: Accept other suitable responses which show that the candidate has understood the passage and how the title leads to it AND is able to provide substantiation. A candidate can score 1 mark for an answer that is not well-substantiated. (2)
1.14 It is called a hearing aid. (1) 1.15 When someone has passed on/died. (1)
1.16 The 2001 census only targeted disabled people, while the 2011 census targeted the whole South African population. (2)
1.17 Open-ended. Accept a suitable response, e.g.
No. One can become deaf when listening to loud music using headphones/ damage your eardrums/become oblivious to one’s surroundings.
OR
Yes. It is more enjoyable to use headphones when listening to your favourite music. There is no evidence to prove that listening to loud music using headphones leads to hearing loss.
NOTE: Accept other suitable responses. A candidate can score 1 mark for an answer that is not well-substantiated. Accept a combination answer. (2)
TOTAL SECTION A: 30
SECTION B: SUMMARY
QUESTION 2
The following points form the answer to the question.
QUOTATIONS | FACTS | ||
1. | ‘There are, however, plenty of techniques. Find one that works for you.’ | 1. | Find a study method that works for you. |
2. | ‘Get up early and start working as early in the day as possible.’ | 2. | Wake up early to start working early. /Get up early to start working. |
3. | ‘...revise in sessions of 45 minutes each, separated by fifteen minute breaks.’ | 3. | Have short revision sessions with breaks in between. |
4. | ‘Taking breaks does not mean playing video games or chatting to friends. / Stretch your legs or get some fresh air during your breaks.’ | 4. | Breaks should be used to get fresh air/stretching legs. |
5. | ‘Form a revision group with friends to test one another and check your progress.’ | 5. | Forming a revision/study group with friends is a good idea. |
6. | ‘Resist the urge to revise while propped up in bed.’/ ‘Sit at a desk or a table where you can keep your space orderly and avoid sleeping.’ | 6. | Sit at a table or a desk and not in bed. |
7. | ‘Work through past papers to prepare for exams and familiarise yourself with what kind of questions to expect.’ | 7. | Work through past papers to get an idea of how questions are asked/set. |
8. | ‘Avoid people who stress too much during exams.’ | 8. | Stay away from people who are stressful. |
9. | ‘…drink water and eat healthily.’ | 9. | Stay hydrated and eat healthily. |
10. | ‘… no parties with friends.’ | 10. | Have parties with friends after your final exams. |
MARKING THE SUMMARY
The summary should be marked as follows:
NOTE:
TOTAL SECTION B: 10
SECTION C: LANGUAGE
QUESTION 3: ANALYSING AN ADVERTISEMENT
3.1 Because skin is for life. (1)
3.2 It appeals to women who want beautiful skin/women who have dry and damaged skin/women who care about their skin. (1)
3.3 Your skin will be protected.
Damaged skin will be healed/restored.
Dry skin will be moisturised. (3)
3.4 It contains Tea Tree Oil and Aloe Vera. (2)
3.5 C/the product definitely works. (1)
3.6 Open-ended. Accept a suitable response, e.g.
Yes. The girl looks happy with her skin/is smiling after using the product. The words ‘dryness to moisture’, could show that her skin has changed from being dry to smooth/moisturised.
OR
No. There is no evidence in the picture that her skin was dry and damaged before using the product. The before and after picture could be one of someone else’s skin.
NOTE: Do not award a mark for Yes or No. A candidate can score 1 mark for an answer that is not well-substantiated. (2) [10]
QUESTION 4: ANALYSING A CARTOON
4.1
4.1.1 C/unreasonable (1)
4.1.2 The word ‘NOT’ (1)
4.2 Jeremy’s mother throws her arms in the air.
NOTE: Accept any TWO of the above. (2)
4.3 The word SO is written in capital letters/bold. There are two question marks. (2)
4.4 She feels that he is too young. (1)
4.5 I was me and not you. (1)
4.6 Open-ended. Accept a suitable response, e.g.
Yes. He is definitely too young (and irresponsible). Going on a road trip means you need money and transport which Jeremy most probably does not have. His parents are also concerned about his safety.
OR
No. They should allow Jeremy to go on the road trip because he wants to have fun like any other 16-year-old. Doing this without his parents could teach him to become more responsible.
NOTE: Do not award a mark for Yes or No. A candidate can score 1 mark for an answer that is not well-substantiated. (2) [10]
QUESTION 5: LANGUAGE AND EDITING SKILLS
5.1
5.1.1
5.1.2 don’t they/do they not (1)
NOTE: Apostrophe must be used correctly.
5.1.3 well-known – adjective (1) Nelson Mandela – (proper) noun (1)
5.1.4 A parent does not have to set the example by saying please and thank you. (1)
5.1.5 Children were expressing gratitude as a routine while having dinner. (1)
5.1.6 Amy said that gratitude was a powerful catalyst for happiness and the spark that lit up her life.
NOTE: Award ONE mark for each of the underlined changes and ONE mark for the omission of the comma, the quotation marks and the insertion of the final full stop as well as the correct use of capital and small letters throughout. (4)
5.1.7 more important (1)
5.2
5.2.1 The value of showing gratitude should be emphasised. (1)
5.2.2 aloud (1)
5.2.3 Showing gratitude has a positive influence on people’s friendships (1)
5.2.4 It is a good idea for us to start gratitude journals. (1)
5.2.5 appreciation (1)
5.2.6 Either express gratitude by writing a thank you letter or buying a gift./ Either express gratitude by buying a gift or writing a letter. (1)
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TOTAL SECTION C: 40
GRAND TOTAL: 80
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
SECTION A: NOVEL
NOTE: Candidates are required to answer ONE question on the novel they have studied.
QUESTION 1: CRY, THE BELOVED COUNTRY
Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions, i.e. QUESTIONS 1.1 and 1.2.
1.1
1.1.1
1.1.2 The letter from Reverend Msimangu urges him to come to Johannesburg because his sister is very ill. √ / Rev. Msimangu informs Stephen that Gertrude is very ill. √ (1)
1.1.3 Claremont is very dirty/ dilapidated/neglected/smells of alcohol. √ (1)
1.1.4 The paper enhances oppression of black people/ it does not report on everything that should be mentioned. √ (1)
1.1.5
1.1.6 The streets in Claremont are named after beautiful and clean flowers yet the streets are an eye sore/ they are dirty and shabby. √√ (2)
1.1.7 The discussion of the theme of urban life versus rural life, should include the following points, among others:
NOTE: For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated.
A candidate can score 1–2 marks for a response which is not well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must be grounded in the novel. (3)
1.1.8 Open-ended.
Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the following viewpoints, among others:
Yes.
OR
No.
NOTE: Do NOT award a mark for YES or NO. Credit responses where a combination is given. For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated. A candidate can score 2 or 3 marks for a response which is well-substantiated. The candidate’s response must be grounded in the text of the novel. (3) AND
1.2.1 Kumalo visits the chief to talk about ways to restore Ndotsheni as the land is barren. √ He also wants to discuss ways to stop people from going to Johannesburg. √ (2)
1.2.2 It is customary for the chief to make people wait. √ It gives Stephen a chance to rest. √ (2)
1.2.3
1.2.4 C/toppled √ (1)
1.2.5 The white men expect the chiefs to run things normally (hold the pieces together) but the same white men have destabilised the communities (have taken most of the pieces away). √√ (2)
1.2.6 Chiefs ruled valueless and desolated states. √ (1)
1.2.7
1.2.8 Open-ended.
Accept any relevant response which shows understanding of the story, among others:
Yes.
OR
No.
QUESTION 2: STRANGE CASE OF DR JEKYLL AND MR HYDE
Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions, i.e. QUESTIONS 2.1 AND 2.2.
2.1
2.1.1
2.1.2 The maid fainted when she saw Hyde beating Danvers to death/That was the time she had woken up after the murder. √ (1)
2.1.3 ‘incredibly mangled’ √ (1)
2.1.4 The stick was made of scarce/strong/thick wood √ (1)
2.1.5
2.1.6 The police found a sealed and stamped envelope with the name and address of Mr Utterson. √ (1)
2.1.7 Sir Danvers is old/aged/polite/beautiful √ and Mr Hyde is small/ impatient. √ (2)
2.1.8 People that have seen him find it difficult to describe him √/very few people that know him /his family cannot be traced √/he has no photograph √/people describe him differently.
NOTE: Accept ANY TWO of the above. (2)
2.1.9 The discussion should show an understanding of the following points, among others:
OR
NOTE: For full marks, the response must be well-substantiated.
A candidate can score 1–2 marks for a response which is not well-substantiated. The candidate’s interpretation must be grounded in the novel. (3)
2.2
2.2.1
2.2.2
2.2.3
2.2.4 Jekyll is desperately in need of a drug to keep him alive or as Dr Jekyll. √ (1)
2.2.5 Jekyll fears to go out with Utterson and Enfield, there is a possibility of him transforming into Mr Hyde in their presence. √/His secret of being Mr Hyde will be discovered. Hyde is being sought by the police for the murder of Sir Danvers. √ (2)
2.2.6 The discussion of the theme ‘primitive’ and ‘civilised’ society, should include the following points, among others:
2.2.7 Open-ended.
Accept any relevant response which shows understanding of the story, among others:
Yes.
No.
SECTION B: DRAMA
QUESTION 3: MACBETH
NOTE: Candidates are required to answer ONE question on the drama they have studied.
Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions, i.e. QUESTIONS 3.1 and 3.2.
3.1
3.1.1
3.1.2
3.1.3 Duncan has rewarded Macbeth by giving him a title of Macdonwald, who was considered to be a traitor because he fought against Scotland. Macbeth fought bravely against Macdonwald and the King trusts him, Macbeth is now the one who ends up killing the King, therefore is a traitor and untrustworthy √√ (2)
3.1.4
3.1.5
3.1.6
3.1.7 Open-ended.
Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the drama, among others:
No.
OR
Yes.
AND
3.2.1
3.2.2 Macduff later fights with Macbeth √ and kills him in revenge for the death of his family. √ (2)
3.2.3
3.2.4 Bravery /Patriotism √
Both make plans/bent on saving Scotland/ Both make plans to destroy Macbeth/ Both make plans to bring the tyranny to an end. √ (2)
3.2.5 Accept a relevant, text-based explanation on the theme of good versus evil.
3.2.6 Open-ended.
Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the reasons why Macduff left Scotland, among others:
No.
OR
Yes.
QUESTION 4: MY CHILDREN! MY AFRICA!
4.1
4.1.1
4.1.2
4.1.3
4.1.4 Mr M leaves Thami and Isabel to go to a staff meeting. √ (1)
4.1.5 The discussion of the theme of friendship, should include the following points, among others:
4.1.6 Yes.
No.
AND
4.2
4.2.1
4.2.2
4.2.3 It is ironic that the comrades and Thami are fighting for freedom from the oppression by white people, yet the comrades restrict the movement/association of blacks (Thami can no longer meet Isabel freely). √√ (2)
4.2.4 It reveals that Isabel is caring, √ she is worried about Thami’s decision of joining the struggle and his future prospects. √
OR
Isabel is protective of Thami, √ she comes to his rescue when Mr M confronts him by saying that she is no longer interested in Thami’s response to the question she asked. √ (2)
4.2.5 Open-ended.
Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of Mr M deeds as a teacher, among others:
Yes.
No.
SECTION C: SHORT STORIES
QUESTION 5
NOTE: Candidates are required to answer BOTH questions set on the TWO short stories they have studied i.e. QUESTIONS 5.1 and 5.2.
QUESTION 5.1: TRANSFORMING MOMENTS by Gcina Mhlophe
5.1
5.1.1
5.1.2 D/shocked. √ (1)
5.1.3 She hates herself. √/She has low self-esteem. √/She believes she is ugly. √ (2)
NOTE: Accept any TWO of the above.
5.1.4
5.1.5 The narrator as a church goer felt she was introduced into poetry by imbongi so that she could also be a praise poet like him. √√ (2)
5.1.6 The discussion of the theme of self-discovery, should include the following points, among others:
5.1.7 Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the following viewpoints, among others:
Yes.
OR
No.
QUESTION 5.2: THE LAST BREATH by Sam Kahiga
5.2 5.2.1 They are coming from the blind school √ /They went to see Eva (the narrator’s girlfriend). √ (1)
5.2.2
5.2.3 The narrator and his father have an unhealthy relationship – they do not see eye to eye on a number of issues. √
The narrator’s father controls his son – he does not allow the narrator to make his own decisions. √ (2)
5.2.4 He has seen that Eva is caring/kind-hearted/loving/Eva is not as helpless as he thought. / √ Eva is a good person. √ (1)
5.2.5
5.2.6 She accepts Eva/she respects her son’s decision. √ (1)
5.2.7 ‘terrible cough’ √ (1)
5.2.8 When the narrator’s father is about to die, he decides to donate his cornea to Eva. In the sense he literally gave her eyes and that made his son happy. √√√ (3)
5.2.9 Open-ended.
Accept a relevant response which shows an understanding of the following viewpoints, among others:
Yes.
No.
SECTION D: POETRY
NOTE: Candidates are required to answer ALL the questions.
QUESTION 6.1: Alexandra by Mongane Wally Serote
6.1
6.1.1
6.1.2 B/apostrophe. √ (1)
6.1.3 He was born and raised there √ (as a mother would give birth and raise a child)/It is a part of him. √It will always be part of him. √
The township is forever tied to the speaker, just like a mother and child are tied. √ (2)
6.1.4 In the first stanza he sees his mother as beautiful and loving. √ In the fourth stanza he sees his mother as cruel and frightening. √ (2)
6.1.5
6.1.6 The discussion of the theme of poverty, should include the following points, among others:
6.1.7 Open-ended.
Accept a relevant response which shows the understanding of the following viewpoints, among others:
Yes.
OR
No.
QUESTION 6.2: Death by Anonymous
6.2.1
6.2.2 The speaker called for water because he wanted to wash and refresh himself. √ /Wanted to stay awake.√ (1)
6.2.3
6.2.4 The speaker is afraid to die. The speaker tries everything in his power to avoid death – he goes to church to pray. √/ He tries to run away from death – he goes to the sea and rows a boat. √ (2)
6.2.5 Death is in control of his life. There is no escape. √√ (2)
6.2.6 Death is personified throughout the poem. √ (1)
6.2.7 Yes.
No.
TOTAL SECTION D: 35
GRAND TOTAL: 70
INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION
These marking guidelines must be used in conjunction with the attached English FAL assessment rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
NOTE: All pieces of writing should be read at least TWICE during assessment, once for content and once for language respectively. Errors must be indicated in your second reading.
SECTION A: ESSAY
QUESTION 1
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:
NOTE:
1.11. My enemy has become my friend and …
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.2 Possibilities for me in the future
Descriptive/Narrative/Reflective
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.3 Unbelievable!
Narrative/Reflective/Descriptive
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.4 Doing what is right is not always popular.
Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive/Narrative
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.5 ‘You cannot change the past, but you can make a difference now.’ – Avis J. Williams
Discursive/Argumentative/Descriptive/Reflective/Narrative
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.6 Security cameras tend to violate privacy.
Argumentative/Discursive/Reflective/Narrative
NOTE: A candidate may write an essay which contains elements of more than one type of essay. [50]
1.7 Interpretation of pictures
The candidate:
1.7.1 Picture: Two dice
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
1.7.2 Picture: Billows of smoke coming from pipe/chimney/ smokestack
Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective/Argumentative/Discursive
TOTAL SECTION A: 50
SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 2
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:
NOTE:
2.1 FRIENDLY LETTER
Apology and explanation about textbook.
2.2 DIALOGUE
A conversation between the candidate and father/mother.
2.3 OBITUARY
A best friend has passed away
2.4 NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
Service delivery protest
The content should include:
TOTAL SECTION B: 30
SECTION C: SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT
QUESTION 3
INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS:
NOTE: o Adhere to the length of 80–100 words as prescribed in the CAPS document. However, should the maximum word count be reached mid-sentence, read to the end of that sentence.
3.1 FLYER
Fundraising for tracksuits
3.2 DIARY ENTRIES
The candidate’s feelings BEFORE and AFTER delivering the acceptance speech.
3.3 DIRECTIONS
Directions to the Youth Centre
TOTAL SECTION C: 20
GRAND TOTAL: 100
SECTION A: RUBRIC FOR ASSESSING ESSAY – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate | |
CONTENT AND PLANNING (Response and ideas) 30 MARKS | Upper Level | 28–30 | 22–24 | 16–18 | 10–12 | 4–6 |
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LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING 15 MARKS | Upper Level | 14–15 | 11–12 | 8–9 | 5–6 | 0–3 |
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STRUCTURE 5 MARKS | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 0–1 | |
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MARKS RANGE | 40–50 | 30–39 | 20–29 | 10–19 | 0–9 |
SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT PLANNING AND FORMAT 18 MARKS | 15–18 | 11–14 | 8–10 | 5–7 | 0–4 |
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LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING | 10–12 | 8–9 | 6–7 | 4–5 | 0–3 |
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MARKS RANGE | 25–30 | 19–23 | 14–17 | 9–12 | 0–7 |
SECTION C: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT – FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]
Criteria | Exceptional | Skilful | Moderate | Elementary | Inadequate |
CONTENT PLANNING AND FORMAT 12 MARKS | 10–12 | 8–9 | 6–7 | 4–5 | 0–3 |
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LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING Punctuation, spelling 8 MARKS | 7–8 | 5–6 | 4 | 3 | 0–2 |
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MARKS RANGE | 17–20 | 13–15 | 10–11 | 7–8 | 0–5 |