English First Additional Language
Paper 3 (P3)
Grade 12
Nsc Past Papers And Memos
September 2016

INSTRUCTIONS AND INFORMATION 
This memorandum must be used together with the attached English FAL  Assessment Rubrics for SECTIONS A, B and C.
NOTE: All pieces of writing should be read at least TWICE during assessment,  once for content and once for language respectively. Errors have to be  indicated in your second reading. 

MEMORANDUM

SECTION A: ESSAY 
QUESTION 1   

INSTRUCTIONS TO MARKERS: 

  • Candidates are required to write on ONE topic only.
  • The ideas listed below the topics are only some ways in which the topics could  be interpreted. Full credit must be given for the candidates’ own interpretation.
  • Use the 50-mark assessment rubric to mark the essays. The texts produced  by candidates must be assessed according to the following criteria as set out  in the assessment rubric:
    • Content and planning = 30 marks
    • Language, style and editing = 15 marks
    • Structure = 5 marks 

NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes  penalties. If a candidate exceeds the word limit, read up to TEN words  above the upper limit and ignore the rest. 
1.1 The negative side of South African youth culture 

Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective 
The following must be considered: 

    • If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events  leads to a positive outcome. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/incident.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and  feelings/emotions. [50]

1.2 Living positively in challenging times 

Narrative/Descriptive/Reflective 
The following must be considered: 

    • If narrative, a strong storyline must be evident in which a series of events  leads to a positive outcome. There must be a logical sequence of tense.
    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/incident.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and  feelings/emotions. [50]

1.3 We can escape the cycle of death and disease in South Africa. Do you agree? 

Argumentative 
The following must be considered: 

    • The essay must offer one distinct opinion, therefore the essay must be  either FOR OR AGAINST the topic given.
    • There should be a clear defence/motivation/argument for the position  taken. [50] 

1.4 What I imagine the world would be like in 30 years 

Descriptive/Reflective 
The following must be considered: 

    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an experience/incident.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and  feelings/emotions. [50] 

1.5 Is the culture of human rights being abused by South Africans? Discuss your views. 

Discursive/Reflective 
The following must be considered: 

    • If discursive, a balanced view of both sides of the statement must be  reflected. Opposing views must be presented impartially.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and  feelings/emotions. [50] 

1.6 Betrayal (being sold out to an enemy) at the hands of a trusted friend 

Descriptive/Narrative/Reflective 
The following must be considered: 

    • If descriptive, there must be a vivid description of an incident/experience  to illustrate the statement.
    • If narrative, a strong storyline illustrating the statement must be evident in  which a series of events are shown. There must be a logical sequence of  tense.
    • If reflective, there must be a personal account of thought processes and  feelings/emotions. [50]

1.7 Interpretation of pictures 

  • The writer may interpret the picture in any way.
  • The writer may choose to write any type of essay.
  • The interpretation must be linked to the picture.
  • The writer should give the essay a suitable title.
  • The writer may write in any appropriate tense. 

1.7.1 Picture: old and torn shoes/boots 

The writer may interpret the picture in the following ways, among others: 

    • Literal interpretation: poverty and deprivation, destitution, being  desperate for things etc.
    • Figurative interpretations: life experiences, challenges in life,  culmination of one’s life struggles etc. [50]

1.7.2 Picture: A ‘No Entry’ road sign 

The writer of the essay may interpret the pictures in the following  ways, among others: 

    • Literal interpretations: ignoring road rules, accidents, how to  reduce road fatalities in SA etc.
    • Figurative interpretations: constraints, limitations in life, barriers to  success, being deprived of opportunities etc. [50] 

TOTAL SECTION A: 50

SECTION B: LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT 
QUESTION 2 
Instructions to Markers: 

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question. 
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas. 
  • Use the 30-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section. The  texts produced by candidates must be assessed according to the following  criteria as set out in the assessment rubric.
    • Content, planning and format (18 marks).
    • Language, style and editing (12 marks) 

NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes  penalties. 

2.1 DIALOGUE 

  • The tone must be informal
  • The following ideas may be explored, among others: 
    • A brief scenario (context) must be sketched before the speakers  start speaking. 
    • The names of speakers must appear on the left-hand side of the  page.
    • A colon must appear after the name of each speaker. 
    • A new line must be used to indicate each speaker.
    • Stage directions (tone of voice, actions etc.) must be written in  brackets, if applicable.
  • The following ideas may be explored, among others:
    • The friend must show regret for his/her actions.
    • He/she must be willing to change his/her behaviour. [30] ∙ 

2.2 AGENDA AND MINUTES OF MEETING 

  • The language and register should be appropriate to the audience of  the meeting.
  • The agenda and minutes should be arranged separately.
  • The items in agenda should correlate with those in minutes.
  • Minutes should be relevant to the occasion (should address the  specific content of the meeting).
  • A logical and appropriate arrangement of items should be evident.
  • Full sentences are not necessary. [30] 

2.3 OBITUARY 

  • The tone must be formal.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Full name of the deceased
    • Date of birth 
    • Date of death
  • The following information may also be included: 
    • Birth place
    • Where the person was living at the time of death
    • Key survivors
    • Biographical information
  • Content should include the following, among others:
    • Contribution to community’s small businesses
    • A tribute must also be paid to the deceased [30]

2.4 FORMAL LETTER 

  • The letter should be addressed to the bus company.
  • The tone and register should be formal.
  • The following aspects of format should be included:
    • Address of sender
    • Date
    • Address of recipient
    • Greeting
    • Subject line
    • Suitable ending
    • Signature/name of sender
  • The following information should be included, among others:
    • Complaint about damaged luggage
    • Asking for compensation for loss. [30] ∙ 

TOTAL SECTION B: 30

SECTION C: SHORTER TEXT TRANSACTIONAL/REFERENTIAL/ INFORMATIONAL 
QUESTION 3 
Instructions to Markers: 

  • Candidates are required to answer ONE question.
  • Marking must be objective. Give credit for relevant ideas. 
  • Use the 20-mark assessment rubric to mark the responses in this section.  The texts produced by the candidates should be assessed according to the  following criteria as set out in the assessment rubric.
    • Content, planning and format (12 marks)
    • Language, style and editing (8 marks) 

NOTE: No additional penalties may be imposed as the rubric itself imposes  penalties. 

3.1 ADVERTISEMENT 

The following information must be included, among others: 

    • Persuasive language and catchy phrases should be used.
    • Provide adequate information regarding the person to be voted for.
    • Promises relating to service to be provided may be included.
    • An appeal for support should be evident (to become RCL member)
    • No marks are awarded for illustrations. [20] 

3.2 POSTCARD 

  • The language (including salutation and ending/conclusion) can be  informal and colloquial but should not include slang expression.
  • Complete sentences are not required.
  • The content must be brief but informative.
  • The following details about content should be included, among  others: 
    • Wonderful holiday experiences
  • Do not award marks for illustrations [20]

3.3 INSTRUCTIONS 

  • Instructions may be in point or paragraph form.
  • Numbers or bullets may be used to indicate each new instruction.
  • The language should be clear and instructive.
  • Candidates may also choose to write each instruction on a new line or  leave lines between instructions.
  • Complete sentences are not necessary.
  • Details about content should include the following, among others:
    • Tips on how to save water [20] 

TOTAL SECTION C: 20 
GRAND TOTAL 100

SECTION A: RUBRIC FOR ASSESSING ESSAY FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [50 marks] 

  • Always use the rubric when marking the creative essay (Paper 3, Section A).
  • The marks from 0–50 have been divided into 5 major level descriptors.
  • In the Content, Language and Style criteria, each of the five level descriptors is divided into an upper and a lower level sub-category with the applicable mark range and descriptors.
  • Structure is not affected by the upper level and lower level division.

Criteria 

 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT AND PLANNING (Response and ideas) 

  • Organisation of ideas for planning
  • Awareness of purpose, audience and context 

30 MARKS

UPPER LEVEL

28–30 

22–24 

16–18 

10–12 

4–6

  • Outstanding/Striking response beyond normal  expectations.
  • Intelligent, thought-provoking and mature  ideas 
  •  Exceptionally well organised and coherent  (connected) including introduction, body and  conclusion/ending.
  • Very well-crafted response.
  • Fully relevant and interesting. 
  • Ideas with evidence of maturity
  • Very well organised and coherent  (connected) including introduction, body  and conclusion/ending.
  • Satisfactory response 
  • Ideas are reasonably coherent  and convincing. 
  • Reasonably organised and  coherent including introduction,  body and conclusion/ending
  • Inconsistently coherent  response 
  • Unclear ideas and unoriginal
  • Little evidence of organisation  and coherence.
  • Totally irrelevant response.
  • Confused and unfocused ideas.
  • Vague and repetitive. 
  • Unorganised and incoherent. 

LOWER LEVEL

25–27 

19–21 

13–15 

7–9 

0–3

  • Excellent response but lacks the exceptionally  striking qualities of the outstanding essay.
  • Mature and intelligent ideas
  • Skilfully organised and coherent (connected)  including introduction, body and  conclusion/ending.
  • Well-crafted response. 
  • Relevant and interesting ideas.
  • Well organised and coherent (connected)  including introduction, body and  conclusion.
  • Satisfactory response but some  lapses in clarity. 
  • Ideas are fairly coherent and  convincing. 
  • Some degree of organisation and  coherence including introduction,  body and conclusion.
  • Largely irrelevant response
  • Ideas tend to be disconnected  and confusing.
  • Hardly any evidence of organisation and coherence.
  • No attempt to respond to the  topic 
  • Completely irrelevant and inappropriate
  • Unfocused and muddled

LANGUAGE, STYLE AND EDITING 

  • Tone, register, style,  
  • vocabulary appropriate to  purpose/effect and context Word choice;
  • Language use and  conventions, punctuation,  grammar, spelling 

15 MARKS

UPPER LEVEL

14–15 

11–12 

8–9 

5–6 

0–3

  • Tone, register, style, vocabulary highly  appropriate to purpose, audience and context
  • Language confident, exceptionally impressive 
  • Compelling and rhetorically effective in tone. 
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling.
  • Very skilfully crafted.
  • Tone, register, style and vocabulary very  appropriate to purpose, audience and  context. 
  • Language is effective and a consistently  appropriate tone is used. 
  • Largely error-free in grammar and  spelling. 
  • Very well crafted.
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary appropriate to  purpose, audience and context. 
  • Appropriate use of language to  convey meaning.
  • Tone is appropriate. 
  • Rhetorical devices used to  enhance content.
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary not appropriate to  purpose, audience and context. 
  • Very basic use of language. 
  • Tone and diction are inappropriate. 
  • Very limited vocabulary.
  •  Language incomprehensible 
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary less appropriate to  purpose, audience and context 
  •  Vocabulary limitations so  extreme as to make comprehension impossible
LOWER LEVEL

13 

10 

4

 
  • Language excellent and rhetorically effective  in tone. 
  • Virtually error-free in grammar and spelling. - Skilfully crafted.
  • Language engaging and generally  effective 
  • Appropriate and effective tone. 
  • Few errors in grammar and spelling.
  • Well-crafted
  • Adequate use of language with  some inconsistencies. 
  • Tone generally appropriate and  limited use of rhetorical devices.
  • Inadequate use of language.
  • Little or no variety in sentence. 
  • Exceptionally limited  vocabulary.

STRUCTURE  

  • Features of text; 
  • Paragraph development and  sentence construction  

5 MARKS

 

0–1

  • Excellent development of topic
  • Exceptional detail
  • Sentences, paragraphs exceptionally well constructed
  •  Logical development of details 
  • Coherent 
  • Sentences, paragraphs logical, varied
  • Relevant details developed.
  • Sentences, paragraphs well constructed 
  • Essay still makes sense.
  • Some valid points 
  • Sentences and paragraphs  faulty 
  • Essay still makes some sense.
  •  Necessary points lacking 
  • Sentences and paragraphs  faulty.
  • Essay lacks sense.

MARKS RANGE 

 

43–50 

33–40 

23–30 

13–20 

0–10


 SECTION B: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR LONGER TRANSACTIONAL TEXT FIRST ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [30 MARKS]

Criteria 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT PLANNING  AND FORMAT 

  • Response and ideas:
  • Organisation of ideas  for planning:
  • Purpose, audience and  features/conventions  and context  

18 MARKS

15–18 

11–14 

8–10 

5–7 

0–4

  • Outstanding response beyond  normal expectations 
  • Intelligent and mature ideas 
  • Extensive knowledge of  features of the type of text 
  • Writing maintains focus 
  •  Coherence in content and  ideas.
  • Highly elaborated and all  details support the topic 
  • Appropriate and accurate  format 
  • Very good response demonstrating good  knowledge of features of the  type of text. 
  •  Maintains focus – no  digressions.
  • Coherent in content and  ideas, very well elaborated  and details support topic. 
  •  Appropriate format with  minor inaccuracies. 
  • Adequate response  demonstrating knowledge of features  of the type of text. 
  • Not completely focused  – some digressions. 
  • Reasonably coherent  in content and ideas 
  • Some details support  the topic 
  •  Generally appropriate  format but with some  inaccuracies. 
  •  Basic response  demonstrating some  knowledge of  features of the type  of text. 
  • Some focus but  writing digresses. 
  • Not always coherent in content and ideas. 
  •  Few details support  the topic. 
  •  Necessary rules of  format vaguely  applied. 
  • Some critical  oversights.
  • Response reveals no  knowledge of features of  the type of text 
  • Meaning is obscure with  major digressions.
  • Not coherent in content  and ideas. 
  •  Very few details support  the topic.
  • Necessary rules of  format not applied.

LANGUAGE, STYLE  AND EDITING 

  • Tone, register, style,  purpose/effect;  audience and context  Language use and  conventions;
  • Word choice; Punctuation, spelling

12 MARKS

10–12 

8–9 

6–7 

4–5 

0–3

  •  Tone, register, style, 
  • vocabulary highly appropriate  to purpose, audience and  context.
  • Grammatically accurate and  well-constructed 
  • Virtually error-free. 
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary very appropriate  to purpose, audience and  context
  • Generally grammatically  accurate and well constructed 
  • Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors 
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary  appropriate to purpose,  audience and context.
  • Some grammatical  errors 
  • Adequate vocabulary
  • Errors do not impede  meaning
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary less  appropriate to  purpose, audience  and context
  • Inaccurate grammar  with numerous errors
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning obscured.
  •  Tone, register, style and  vocabulary do not  correspond to purpose,  audience and context.
  • Error-ridden and  confused 
  •  Vocabulary not suitable  for purpose 
  •  Meaning seriously impaired.

MARKS RANGE 

25–30 

19–23 

14–17 

9–12 

0–7


SECTION C: ASSESSMENT RUBRIC FOR SHORTER TRANSACTIONAL FIRST TEXT ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE [20 MARKS]

Criteria 

Exceptional 

Skilful 

Moderate 

Elementary 

Inadequate

CONTENT PLANNING  AND FORMAT 

  • Response and ideas;
  • Organisation of ideas;
  • Features/conventions  and context  

12 MARKS

10–12 

8–9 

6–7 

4–5 

0–3

  • Outstanding response beyond  normal expectations
  • Intelligent and mature ideas
  • Extensive knowledge of features of the type of text
  • Writing maintains focus
  • Coherence in content and  ideas.
  • Highly elaborated and all  details support the topic 
  •  Appropriate and accurate  format 
  • Very good response  demonstrating good  knowledge of features of  the type of text. 
  • Maintains focus – no  digressions. 
  • Coherent in content and  ideas, very well elaborated and details  support topic. 
  • Appropriate format with  minor inaccuracies. 
  • Adequate response demonstrating knowledge  of features of the type of  text. 
  •  Not completely focused – some digressions. 
  •  Reasonably coherent in  content and ideas
  • Some details support the  topic  
  • Generally appropriate  format but with someinaccuracies. 
  •  Basic response demonstrating some  knowledge of  features of the type  of text. 
  • Some focus but  writing digresses. 
  •  Not always coherent in content and ideas.
  •  Few details support  the topic. 
  • Some critical  oversights.
  • Response reveals no  knowledge of features  of the type of text
  • Meaning is obscure  with major digressions. 
  • Not coherent in content and ideas. 
  • Very few details support the topic. 
  • Necessary rules of  format not applied.

LANGUAGE, STYLE  AND EDITING 

  • Tone, register, style,  purpose/effect, 
  • audience and context; Language use and  conventions;
  • Word choice;
  • Punctuation, spelling

8 MARKS

7–8 

5–6 

0–2

  • Tone, register, style,  vocabulary highly appropriate  to purpose, audience and  context.
  • Grammatically accurate and  well-constructed 
  • Virtually error-free. 
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary very appropriate to purpose,  audience and context 
  • Generally grammatically  accurate and well constructed 
  •  Very good vocabulary
  • Mostly free of errors.
  • Tone, register, style and  vocabulary appropriate to  purpose, audience and context.  
  • Some grammatical errors 
  •  Adequate vocabulary  
  • Errors do not impede  meaning.
  • Tone, register, style  and vocabulary less  appropriate to  purpose, audience and context  
  • Inaccurate grammar  with numerous errors 
  • Limited vocabulary
  • Meaning is obscured.
  •  Tone, register, style  and vocabulary do not  correspond to purpose, audience and  context.  
  • Error-ridden and  confused  
  • Vocabulary not suitable for purpose 
  • Meaning seriously  impaired.

MARKS RANGE 

17–20 

13–15 

10–11 

7–8 

0–5

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